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 Sep 29 2009, 08:10 AM
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 AIDS at RAVES.  Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,386 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 598,878  |
I havent posted in forever,
I designed a homecoming flyer for my school this year and I would just like some feedback before every student receives one in their hands. Our Activities director wanted a club type feel for the flyers and something retro but young and hip so... |
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Oct 15 2009, 09:25 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I pretty much agree with everyone else, esp with JC. I don't like how you used so many textures and patterns, and I agree that the "last day for tickets" text and stuff is too small and out of place. Additionally, I think you should make the cube(?) a bit more... cube-ish and noticeable. I also don't like the gradient you used for the little shapes and stuff. Overall, it looks pretty busy to me, however, if you sorta tone down on the patterns, texturess, and colors some, then it could look way better. Otherwise, good job!
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synatribe Party Flyer Sep 29 2009, 08:10 AM
tcunningham date and location look messay compared to the rest... Sep 29 2009, 08:14 AM doughnut "last day for tickets" font looks out of... Sep 29 2009, 08:56 AM brooklyneast05 looks overdone with too much stuff to me. i don... Sep 29 2009, 09:21 AM jcp ^presto.
I think it is a little too busy. Just ton... Sep 29 2009, 11:24 AM manny-the-dino I second Julia and JC. You're using too many t... Sep 29 2009, 03:02 PM HeartOfPandora About the "Gahr High School" bit...
All... Sep 30 2009, 06:01 PM manny-the-dino ^ I thought I was the only one. Oct 1 2009, 07:03 PM brooklyneast05 i thought the high school musical theme thing was ... Oct 1 2009, 07:05 PM deteam agree with every one else, with a little touch up ... Oct 2 2009, 12:04 AM moorepocket It looks great. I like the colors you used. IT mat... Oct 15 2009, 06:54 PM
synatribe QUOTE(moorepocket @ Oct 15 2009, 06:54 PM... Oct 15 2009, 08:41 PM |
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