Graduation Flyer, First Flyer Options

[deteam]

Feedback is welcomed, first flyer so yaa ... gimme that advice on what to fix


Edit: I know i spelled graduation wrong lol

Version 2


Edited it with some of the things you said.


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[HeartOfPandora]

Aw yeah, the colours are definitely much better. You still have three fonts going on, though, and I'm not really certain how that block font matches the fancy one. It's a cool font, tru dat, but it looks a bit out of place. I'd maybe try a clean serif for all the information, and use that fancy font for headings (Amanda's, Graduation Bash, the date and maybe the RSVP spot). That way no one has to strain to read it, but it still looks classy.

And I like that you changed the roses into vectors. On the other hand, the background to the glasses looks fake lol. They were obviously photographed on a white background, but being that they're glass and transparent, they should at least reflect background colour you picked. Too lazy to think how, but it wouldn't be too hard (just don't oversaturate it...they are still a bit opaque IRL).

The key with things like this is consistency. If you use glow on one font, use it everywhere that font appears.

PS: Don't capitalise all the words in the info. It should be "Come party with us..." and only proper nouns should be capitalised.


Looks much better, though, so keep up the good work.

[deteam]

Aw yeah, the colours are definitely much better. You still have three fonts going on, though, and I'm not really certain how that block font matches the fancy one. It's a cool font, tru dat, but it looks a bit out of place. I'd maybe try a clean serif for all the information, and use that fancy font for headings (Amanda's, Graduation Bash, the date and maybe the RSVP spot). That way no one has to strain to read it, but it still looks classy.

And I like that you changed the roses into vectors. On the other hand, the background to the glasses looks fake lol. They were obviously photographed on a white background, but being that they're glass and transparent, they should at least reflect background colour you picked. Too lazy to think how, but it wouldn't be too hard (just don't oversaturate it...they are still a bit opaque IRL).

The key with things like this is consistency. If you use glow on one font, use it everywhere that font appears.

PS: Don't capitalise all the words in the info. It should be "Come party with us..." and only proper nouns should be capitalised.
Looks much better, though, so keep up the good work.

ok so how do i do that whole glass background thing, and also which 2 text's do you suggest i keep? should i use the "Amanda" One for both ["Amanda's" and "Graduation Bash"] and then one Simple text for all the info ?

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