Graduation Flyer, First Flyer Options

[deteam]

Feedback is welcomed, first flyer so yaa ... gimme that advice on what to fix


Edit: I know i spelled graduation wrong lol

Version 2


Edited it with some of the things you said.


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[HeartOfPandora]

I'm tired, so this critique is not going to look very pretty:

Too many fonts, keep it to two maximum.
Needs space for a footer, even if it's got no text and just a continuation of the design.
Not really sure I'm feeling the background choice. Maybe it's the colours?
^ The colours just don't sit right with me, too much brown is the impression I get. *
Speaking of brown, the name blends with the champagne - it should POP.
Not sure what the 5 stars are doing at the bottom, they don't fit.
"Amanda's" overlaps the content box by like 7 pixels - DON'T.
^ The content boxes shouldn't all be connected by that strip of black, it looks weird and out of place.
^ Also, they're really rigid, while the rest of the design is more free flowing.
The champagne glasses look like good quality stock - the roses do not.
^ But why do they fade out? Use the rest of the image to create a bookended effect.

* try picking one colour. Use only shades or hues of that colour, and THEN pick one (or a max of two) other colours to compliment. Brown does not scream "party time!" to me, it screams "poop!" in a very unattractive voice. You want your party-time voice to be sexy, inviting and enticing. Just like the party should be. OR ELSE IT WILL BE LAME.

[deteam]

I'm tired, so this critique is not going to look very pretty:

Too many fonts, keep it to two maximum.
Needs space for a footer, even if it's got no text and just a continuation of the design.
Not really sure I'm feeling the background choice. Maybe it's the colours?
^ The colours just don't sit right with me, too much brown is the impression I get. *
Speaking of brown, the name blends with the champagne - it should POP.
Not sure what the 5 stars are doing at the bottom, they don't fit.
"Amanda's" overlaps the content box by like 7 pixels - DON'T.
^ The content boxes shouldn't all be connected by that strip of black, it looks weird and out of place.
^ Also, they're really rigid, while the rest of the design is more free flowing.
The champagne glasses look like good quality stock - the roses do not.
^ But why do they fade out? Use the rest of the image to create a bookended effect.

* try picking one colour. Use only shades or hues of that colour, and THEN pick one (or a max of two) other colours to compliment. Brown does not scream "party time!" to me, it screams "poop!" in a very unattractive voice. You want your party-time voice to be sexy, inviting and enticing. Just like the party should be. OR ELSE IT WILL BE LAME.

so much 4 being tired lol... actually some really helpful critique, I tried some of your ideas.... let me know what you think

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