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[MoneyIsDaMotive]

-wounderin if this goes in the showcase forum?-

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but heres my first tumblr layout

http://i25.tinypic.com/o0q7m1.jpg

this is really the first layout i ever made.so i knew it wasnt gonna be lookin that good.
but anything i could fix you think? and am i forgeting anything that i should put in for tumblr? im just trying to get people notice my blog so i can start posting good stuff. and have more clicks on my ads. haha;

[jiyong]

Moved to Showcase Booth. Imo, you have way too much going on in one layout. That text is hard to read, the one you used for the headers. I love that light blue you used but none of elements in the layout seem to really mesh together. I would suggest removing a few brushes/textures from the headers, simplifying the font, and maybe rethink a few of the blues you used, cause not all of them quite match.