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Aug 23 2009, 05:27 PM
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![]() What to fix ? Stay Up -1- Subliminal **EDIT** ![]() **EDIT2** ![]() **EDIT3** ![]() **EDIT4** ![]() Stay Up -1- Subliminal
Reason for edit: Posts merged -Kristina/technicolour
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Aug 24 2009, 11:58 AM
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Treasure Pleasure ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Head Staff Posts: 11,193 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 281,127 |
Posts merged.
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Aug 24 2009, 12:10 PM
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![]() Pocketful of Sunshine ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,690 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,004 |
The burned hand is ugly and looks fake. I also think you could have made the image blend in more with the scroll better.
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Aug 24 2009, 02:13 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
The burned hand is ugly and looks fake. I also think you could have made the image blend in more with the scroll better. LOL, ILY. The side facing the ball looks fine, so you just need to lightly burn the back of the hand. im pretty sure they already suggested to me that i burn the hand . . Edit: Bumped a new blood version up there Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Aug 24 2009, 02:21 PM
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![]() 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
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Aug 24 2009, 02:25 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
She probably just saying the burns don't look as real as they could be. Don't take things personally, just keep working on your piece. i can understand constructive criticism, but when all she does is come in here and tell me how bad the design looks and leaves with out leaving any advice on how 2 fix its just disrespectful. If you going to critique my work at least give advice on how 2 fix things and no hate i love you all EDIT: there's a new blood version up as well as i added some stuff to the paper to make it look more worn Give advice Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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deteam Client Piece ?!?!?!? Aug 23 2009, 05:27 PM
technicolour For one, please don't double post. Just use th... Aug 23 2009, 11:26 PM
elletricity Somehow, the hand doesn't look like it's c... Aug 23 2009, 11:27 PM
deteam finally some advice
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Subliminal Aug 23 2009, 11:33 PM
technicolour Yeah, now that I take a look at it more, Gabrielle... Aug 23 2009, 11:36 PM
emberfly Why does it say subliminal GFX all over it?
also,... Aug 23 2009, 11:49 PM
deteam QUOTE(emberfly @ Aug 24 2009, 12:49 AM) W... Aug 23 2009, 11:55 PM
fixtatik Besides the text on the parchment, I think the big... Aug 23 2009, 11:58 PM
deteam QUOTE(fixtatik @ Aug 24 2009, 12:58 AM) B... Aug 24 2009, 12:00 AM
manny-the-dino I think your edit looks better but there's som... Aug 24 2009, 12:01 AM
deteam QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Aug 24 2009,... Aug 24 2009, 12:03 AM
fixtatik QUOTE(deteam @ Aug 24 2009, 01:00 AM) any... Aug 24 2009, 12:08 AM
manny-the-dino I think the angle is right but I dk, I can't p... Aug 24 2009, 12:09 AM
fixtatik ^ It's the tips of the fingers. They have high... Aug 24 2009, 12:14 AM
deteam updated with burned hand
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Subliminal
... Aug 24 2009, 12:22 AM
deteam um editing my post will not bump this thread up 2 ... Aug 24 2009, 12:41 PM
Tomates I like edit 2 the best so far. Aug 24 2009, 12:00 PM
elletricity If your topic is interesting enough, it will be bu... Aug 24 2009, 12:45 PM
iDecay Okay, you didn't specify what I was talking ab... Aug 24 2009, 02:28 PM
deteam QUOTE(iDecay @ Aug 24 2009, 03:28 PM) Oka... Aug 24 2009, 02:51 PM
manny-the-dino QUOTE(Mike @ Aug 24 2009, 09:58 AM) Stay ... Aug 24 2009, 03:55 PM
deteam QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Aug 24 2009,... Aug 24 2009, 06:47 PM
technicolour Here:
For the text to look more "worn... Aug 24 2009, 07:44 PM
deteam QUOTE(technicolour @ Aug 24 2009, 08:44 P... Aug 25 2009, 09:25 AM![]() ![]() |