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deteam
post Aug 23 2009, 05:27 PM
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What to fix ?

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Reason for edit: Posts merged -Kristina/technicolour
 
 
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post Aug 24 2009, 11:58 AM
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post Aug 24 2009, 12:10 PM
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The burned hand is ugly and looks fake. I also think you could have made the image blend in more with the scroll better.

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post Aug 24 2009, 02:13 PM
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QUOTE(iDecay @ Aug 24 2009, 01:10 PM) *
The burned hand is ugly and looks fake. I also think you could have made the image blend in more with the scroll better.
LOL, ILY. throb.gif



QUOTE(fixtatik @ Aug 24 2009, 01:08 AM) *
The side facing the ball looks fine, so you just need to lightly burn the back of the hand.



im pretty sure they already suggested to me that i burn the hand . . stubborn.gif

Edit: Bumped a new blood version up there

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post Aug 24 2009, 02:21 PM
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QUOTE(deteam @ Aug 24 2009, 12:13 PM) *
im pretty sure they already suggested to me that i burn the hand . . stubborn.gif

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She probably just saying the burns don't look as real as they could be. Don't take things personally, just keep working on your piece.
 

Posts in this topic
deteam   Client Piece ?!?!?!?   Aug 23 2009, 05:27 PM
technicolour   For one, please don't double post. Just use th...   Aug 23 2009, 11:26 PM
elletricity   Somehow, the hand doesn't look like it's c...   Aug 23 2009, 11:27 PM
deteam   finally some advice Stay Up -1- Subliminal   Aug 23 2009, 11:33 PM
technicolour   Yeah, now that I take a look at it more, Gabrielle...   Aug 23 2009, 11:36 PM
emberfly   Why does it say subliminal GFX all over it? also,...   Aug 23 2009, 11:49 PM
deteam   QUOTE(emberfly @ Aug 24 2009, 12:49 AM) W...   Aug 23 2009, 11:55 PM
fixtatik   Besides the text on the parchment, I think the big...   Aug 23 2009, 11:58 PM
deteam   QUOTE(fixtatik @ Aug 24 2009, 12:58 AM) B...   Aug 24 2009, 12:00 AM
manny-the-dino   I think your edit looks better but there's som...   Aug 24 2009, 12:01 AM
deteam   QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Aug 24 2009,...   Aug 24 2009, 12:03 AM
fixtatik   QUOTE(deteam @ Aug 24 2009, 01:00 AM) any...   Aug 24 2009, 12:08 AM
manny-the-dino   I think the angle is right but I dk, I can't p...   Aug 24 2009, 12:09 AM
fixtatik   ^ It's the tips of the fingers. They have high...   Aug 24 2009, 12:14 AM
deteam   updated with burned hand Stay Up -1- Subliminal ...   Aug 24 2009, 12:22 AM
Mike   Posts merged.   Aug 24 2009, 11:58 AM
iDecay   The burned hand is ugly and looks fake. I also thi...   Aug 24 2009, 12:10 PM
deteam   QUOTE(iDecay @ Aug 24 2009, 01:10 PM) The...   Aug 24 2009, 02:13 PM
elletricity   QUOTE(deteam @ Aug 24 2009, 12:13 PM) im ...   Aug 24 2009, 02:21 PM
deteam   QUOTE(elletricity @ Aug 24 2009, 03:21 PM...   Aug 24 2009, 02:25 PM
deteam   um editing my post will not bump this thread up 2 ...   Aug 24 2009, 12:41 PM
Tomates   I like edit 2 the best so far.   Aug 24 2009, 12:00 PM
elletricity   If your topic is interesting enough, it will be bu...   Aug 24 2009, 12:45 PM
iDecay   Okay, you didn't specify what I was talking ab...   Aug 24 2009, 02:28 PM
deteam   QUOTE(iDecay @ Aug 24 2009, 03:28 PM) Oka...   Aug 24 2009, 02:51 PM
manny-the-dino   QUOTE(Mike @ Aug 24 2009, 09:58 AM) Stay ...   Aug 24 2009, 03:55 PM
deteam   QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Aug 24 2009,...   Aug 24 2009, 06:47 PM
technicolour   Here: For the text to look more "worn...   Aug 24 2009, 07:44 PM
deteam   QUOTE(technicolour @ Aug 24 2009, 08:44 P...   Aug 25 2009, 09:25 AM


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