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 Aug 23 2009, 05:27 PM
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 What to fix ? Stay Up -1- Subliminal **EDIT**  **EDIT2**  **EDIT3**  **EDIT4**  Stay Up -1- Subliminal
Reason for edit: Posts merged -Kristina/technicolour
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Aug 23 2009, 11:49 PM
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Why does it say subliminal GFX all over it?
also, the font on the parchment looks like it's floating... I assume you wanted it to look like it was written there. |
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Aug 23 2009, 11:58 PM
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Besides the text on the parchment, I think the biggest issue is the hand. It's not so much a lack of shadow on the paper as it is a lack of shadows and highlights on the hand itself. The ball it's holding looks like it'd be giving off one hell of a glow, so the skin closest to the ball should be much brighter than the skin on the back of the fingers. You may even want to distort the tips of the fingers a very small bit to give the impression that it's holding the ball (try holding a ball in your own hand; the contact areas of your skin will squish a little).
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deteam Client Piece ?!?!?!? Aug 23 2009, 05:27 PM
technicolour For one, please don't double post. Just use th... Aug 23 2009, 11:26 PM elletricity Somehow, the hand doesn't look like it's c... Aug 23 2009, 11:27 PM deteam finally some advice
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Subliminal Aug 23 2009, 11:33 PM technicolour Yeah, now that I take a look at it more, Gabrielle... Aug 23 2009, 11:36 PM
deteam QUOTE(emberfly @ Aug 24 2009, 12:49 AM) W... Aug 23 2009, 11:55 PM
deteam QUOTE(fixtatik @ Aug 24 2009, 12:58 AM) B... Aug 24 2009, 12:00 AM manny-the-dino I think your edit looks better but there's som... Aug 24 2009, 12:01 AM deteam QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Aug 24 2009,... Aug 24 2009, 12:03 AM fixtatik QUOTE(deteam @ Aug 24 2009, 01:00 AM) any... Aug 24 2009, 12:08 AM manny-the-dino I think the angle is right but I dk, I can't p... Aug 24 2009, 12:09 AM fixtatik ^ It's the tips of the fingers. They have high... Aug 24 2009, 12:14 AM deteam updated with burned hand
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... Aug 24 2009, 12:22 AM Mike Posts merged. Aug 24 2009, 11:58 AM iDecay The burned hand is ugly and looks fake. I also thi... Aug 24 2009, 12:10 PM deteam QUOTE(iDecay @ Aug 24 2009, 01:10 PM) The... Aug 24 2009, 02:13 PM elletricity QUOTE(deteam @ Aug 24 2009, 12:13 PM) im ... Aug 24 2009, 02:21 PM deteam QUOTE(elletricity @ Aug 24 2009, 03:21 PM... Aug 24 2009, 02:25 PM deteam um editing my post will not bump this thread up 2 ... Aug 24 2009, 12:41 PM Tomates I like edit 2 the best so far. Aug 24 2009, 12:00 PM elletricity If your topic is interesting enough, it will be bu... Aug 24 2009, 12:45 PM iDecay Okay, you didn't specify what I was talking ab... Aug 24 2009, 02:28 PM deteam QUOTE(iDecay @ Aug 24 2009, 03:28 PM) Oka... Aug 24 2009, 02:51 PM manny-the-dino QUOTE(Mike @ Aug 24 2009, 09:58 AM) Stay ... Aug 24 2009, 03:55 PM deteam QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Aug 24 2009,... Aug 24 2009, 06:47 PM technicolour Here:
For the text to look more "worn... Aug 24 2009, 07:44 PM deteam QUOTE(technicolour @ Aug 24 2009, 08:44 P... Aug 25 2009, 09:25 AM |
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