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 Aug 23 2009, 04:49 PM
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I originally designed it for a poster in school (for protest), and then downsized it to fit on the screen. It's supposed to be minimalistic and conceptual. Yes I did steal the "Don't Taze me, bro" Idea. Stock Photo: http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1214436 |
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Aug 23 2009, 05:47 PM
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 I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
what makes you say this is a "concept" piece? just because it has a message to it?
i think it looks bad. i don't get how the background texture fits into the theme. the colors in general could be better. i don't get how that photo specifically ads anything or why you chose it. the effect applied looks bad. she has no visible arms or anything like that. it looks like you just posterized it in photoshop. the font isn't good and the arrangement of the text is confusing and unbalanced. "bro" going down vertical looks bad. there is too much space in between it. fonts aren't built to be typed vertically that way and you can see why, the spacing is awful and needs to always be hand adjusted to fix the spacing. |
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liquidice Concept Piece Aug 23 2009, 04:49 PM
elletricity It took forever to load. I'd work on the place... Aug 23 2009, 04:54 PM liquidice ok. where would you suggest I put it? Aug 23 2009, 05:02 PM IWontRapeYou I can't see it Aug 23 2009, 05:05 PM jcp Looks to me like you did some parts like a vector ... Aug 23 2009, 05:19 PM markmejia From far away, I thought you vectored the girl, an... Aug 23 2009, 06:26 PM emberfly I agree with JC. Aug 23 2009, 06:58 PM
synatribe QUOTE(emberfly @ Aug 23 2009, 06:58 PM) I... Aug 23 2009, 07:17 PM manny-the-dino I agree with JC 100%. She definitely needs arms an... Aug 23 2009, 08:22 PM tcunningham The quality is reallllllly shitty. The message, is... Aug 24 2009, 03:13 AM Amaranthus I don't care for the way her mouth is censored... Aug 24 2009, 10:19 PM |
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