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post Aug 19 2009, 12:23 AM
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I made this for the teamgx.com community. What do you guys think


 
 
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fixtatik
post Aug 21 2009, 02:49 PM
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What I do like:
- fantastic flow

What I don't like:
- the off-center "TeamGX"
- the choppy cog movement
- the "Graphicdesign"; I think it might look better as "GraphicDesign," still dual colors, or entirely lower case to fix with the rest of the text
- the transition backgrounds for graphicdesign - gif - png; they chop off the wording
- the fade out of the design beneath "gif": you can see the blur being cut off at the edges. It would look nicer if you had the same fluent fade out as the "png" design.
- the star at the end reminds me too much of a US Army commercial
- the craquelure result of the star hitting the background has an awkward delay
- the 15.5MB file. I don't think this really works as a GIF for anyone who has an internet connection slower than 1.5MBps, nor will it be beneficial for the teamgx.com server to be loading the file whenever someone wants to see it, especially since it's not cached.
 

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