Art Critique please, -Nothing rude |
 Jul 9 2009, 10:32 PM
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So this is the picture so far, I would love some light critique so I can improve (Ex Colouring, drawing, etc)
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Jul 30 2009, 01:32 PM
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 .beautiful . dreamer . Group: Member Posts: 87 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 333,086 |
Ohh, lovely to see an anime/manga artist here. :3
I think you need to work on your anatomy a bit more. What bothered me most was the chin and how flat the face looked. :< The necks are still a bit too long in the sense that it looks like they're missing that muscle between the neck and the shoulders; the neck should be less straight down on both characters. (sorry I don't know anatomy when it comes to terminology). But if it's your style, there's no to need to fix if you don't want to. x] Otherwise, I see great potential. I love the pastel-type coloring style you have and the artstyle overall. It has a soft appealing to it and the people have nice slender features.  Wonderful job!
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Uso Art Critique please Jul 9 2009, 10:32 PM
Shelby-Zu i completely agree, neck looks a bit long.
but as ... Jul 9 2009, 10:36 PM jcp I really love these! Nothing I can say! It... Jul 9 2009, 10:36 PM doughnut ooo nice coloring. something about her nose and ch... Jul 9 2009, 10:37 PM Uso JCP: Thanks :)
Doughnut: Yeah your right the nose... Jul 9 2009, 10:39 PM schizo I actually think the long neck looks okay on the l... Jul 9 2009, 11:07 PM karmakiller I really like the coloring. I don't mind the l... Jul 9 2009, 11:42 PM Joanne The longer necks look totally fine to me. What... Jul 9 2009, 11:44 PM
Uso QUOTE(Joanne @ Jul 10 2009, 12:44 AM) The... Jul 10 2009, 12:29 AM manny-the-dino QUOTE(schizo @ Jul 9 2009, 09:07 PM) I ac... Jul 10 2009, 12:44 AM Joanne Yeah, what Natalia said. The style's really ni... Jul 10 2009, 01:47 AM Uso Oh and yes its more stylism than realism
Thank... Jul 10 2009, 10:00 AM crueldade I think the mouth is too low on the face, and it e... Jul 10 2009, 12:27 PM Alvin I personally like the drawing, but the only thing ... Jul 16 2009, 01:21 AM Uso Ok So i Went back and fixed it up
HOPEFULLY you ... Jul 19 2009, 11:35 AM -DressYourEyelids- i like the changes. the overall drawing flows much... Jul 19 2009, 12:27 PM tcunningham The chin, nose, and the left cheek (in our perspec... Jul 19 2009, 12:28 PM Uso sweet Im glad you guys like it better
QUOTE(tcun... Jul 19 2009, 12:42 PM manny-the-dino Wow it looks a lot better. Nice job, Stef! Jul 19 2009, 06:01 PM Uso QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Jul 19 2009,... Jul 19 2009, 09:54 PM Joanne .... they're guys? Jul 20 2009, 03:20 AM Uso QUOTE(Joanne @ Jul 20 2009, 04:20 AM) ...... Jul 20 2009, 10:30 PM |
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