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Huge Improvment, I think.
funride
post Jul 29 2009, 10:56 PM
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I think this is way better then the past layouts I've posted about.
I did something different with the content area, text, border, coloring ect.
Tell me what you think!
And I think I should lower the scan lines?
 
 
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technicolour
post Jul 29 2009, 11:24 PM
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QUOTE(technicolour @ Jul 29 2009, 10:05 PM) *
Okay. Time to be Designer Simon Cowell.
Stop posting so many things at a time and getting uuber defensive when someone critiques you. Here are my tips for you. One, LEARN YOUR PROGRAM. Learn it backwards and forwards. Learn the many ways to do ONE THING. Surf online, surf the software websites for tutorials, but LEARN YOUR PROGRAM. Two, learn design. Learn about color, text, the elements and principles. You have to learn the rules before you can break them. Three, sit down, shut up, and actually do these things. I realize that this is incredibly brutal but you're one of the beginners who thinks too highly of themselves at a beginner state.

I'm SO SORRY for being incredibly blunt but I can't really think of a different way to sugar coat these things for you.



Sorry to spread the Cowell around but you're a beginner too. Just at least give what I said above some thought.


The whole concept is too beginnerish. An improvement would be a dramatic change and I'm not seeing one from the previous ish you've posted.
 

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5stardesigns   Huge Improvment   Jul 29 2009, 10:56 PM
schizo   To be completely honest, I think it's a little...   Jul 29 2009, 11:04 PM
IWontRapeYou   What program do you use again?   Jul 29 2009, 11:04 PM
tcunningham   QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Jul 30 2009, 12:04 A...   Jul 29 2009, 11:06 PM
Mikeplyts   Yeah, not so much. The banner is too small and the...   Jul 29 2009, 11:04 PM
5stardesigns   Gabbi: I'm removing the scan lines and I...   Jul 29 2009, 11:09 PM
emberfly   QUOTE(5stardesigns @ Jul 29 2009, 10:56 P...   Jul 29 2009, 11:11 PM
IWontRapeYou   yesss. What photo shop do you have?   Jul 29 2009, 11:11 PM
5stardesigns   ^7.0   Jul 29 2009, 11:12 PM
IWontRapeYou   QUOTE(5stardesigns @ Jul 29 2009, 11:12 P...   Jul 29 2009, 11:18 PM
manny-the-dino   Erm... sorry but you're going back, imo. You w...   Jul 29 2009, 11:12 PM
emberfly   I think you should stay away from scanlines altoge...   Jul 29 2009, 11:13 PM
5stardesigns   ^ I dont like those styles.   Jul 29 2009, 11:20 PM
tcunningham   QUOTE(5stardesigns @ Jul 30 2009, 12:20 A...   Jul 29 2009, 11:20 PM
5stardesigns   QUOTEAnd no one likes the style you design in. Got...   Jul 29 2009, 11:22 PM
technicolour   QUOTE(technicolour @ Jul 29 2009, 10:05 P...   Jul 29 2009, 11:24 PM
5stardesigns   ^Okay... any ideas for the background?   Jul 29 2009, 11:31 PM
technicolour   No. Scratch this layout entirely. Go search for tu...   Jul 29 2009, 11:34 PM
5stardesigns   I've been loooking for insparation. Fine. I gu...   Jul 29 2009, 11:37 PM
technicolour   That is really the best idea for you. I'm sorr...   Jul 29 2009, 11:39 PM
5stardesigns   QUOTEThat is really the best idea for you. I'm...   Jul 29 2009, 11:41 PM
emberfly   QUOTE(5stardesigns @ Jul 29 2009, 11:41 P...   Jul 30 2009, 12:01 AM
technicolour   No no, i'm not comparing any two people. What ...   Jul 29 2009, 11:43 PM
manny-the-dino   QUOTE(technicolour @ Jul 29 2009, 09:43 P...   Jul 29 2009, 11:47 PM
jcp   QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Jul 29 2009,...   Jul 29 2009, 11:51 PM
technicolour   QUOTE(jcp @ Jul 29 2009, 11:51 PM) Still ...   Jul 29 2009, 11:51 PM
5stardesigns   Yeah. Like my last two layouts that got accepted I...   Jul 29 2009, 11:46 PM
5stardesigns   QUOTEWell it can be. shifty.gif No but ...   Jul 29 2009, 11:49 PM
Franklyyn   this is one of the those designs that you probably...   Jul 30 2009, 01:48 PM


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