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Huge Improvment, I think.
funride
post Jul 29 2009, 10:56 PM
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I think this is way better then the past layouts I've posted about.
I did something different with the content area, text, border, coloring ect.
Tell me what you think!
And I think I should lower the scan lines?
 
 
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post Jul 29 2009, 11:04 PM
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Yeah, not so much. The banner is too small and the layout setup isn't very good. You should stay away from dotted/dashed borders and the background color doesn't match, at all. The text isn't much either. You have to make the banner more appealing and stand out from your layout since it's basically the main focus in the design. The black wasn't a good choice either and you should definitely try out some color palettes. I also think that instead of a color background, you should have some kind of texture or maybe even a pattern or something. The scan lines still aren't very attractive either. :\
 

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5stardesigns   Huge Improvment   Jul 29 2009, 10:56 PM
schizo   To be completely honest, I think it's a little...   Jul 29 2009, 11:04 PM
IWontRapeYou   What program do you use again?   Jul 29 2009, 11:04 PM
tcunningham   QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Jul 30 2009, 12:04 A...   Jul 29 2009, 11:06 PM
Mikeplyts   Yeah, not so much. The banner is too small and the...   Jul 29 2009, 11:04 PM
5stardesigns   Gabbi: I'm removing the scan lines and I...   Jul 29 2009, 11:09 PM
emberfly   QUOTE(5stardesigns @ Jul 29 2009, 10:56 P...   Jul 29 2009, 11:11 PM
IWontRapeYou   yesss. What photo shop do you have?   Jul 29 2009, 11:11 PM
5stardesigns   ^7.0   Jul 29 2009, 11:12 PM
IWontRapeYou   QUOTE(5stardesigns @ Jul 29 2009, 11:12 P...   Jul 29 2009, 11:18 PM
manny-the-dino   Erm... sorry but you're going back, imo. You w...   Jul 29 2009, 11:12 PM
emberfly   I think you should stay away from scanlines altoge...   Jul 29 2009, 11:13 PM
5stardesigns   ^ I dont like those styles.   Jul 29 2009, 11:20 PM
tcunningham   QUOTE(5stardesigns @ Jul 30 2009, 12:20 A...   Jul 29 2009, 11:20 PM
5stardesigns   QUOTEAnd no one likes the style you design in. Got...   Jul 29 2009, 11:22 PM
technicolour   QUOTE(technicolour @ Jul 29 2009, 10:05 P...   Jul 29 2009, 11:24 PM
5stardesigns   ^Okay... any ideas for the background?   Jul 29 2009, 11:31 PM
technicolour   No. Scratch this layout entirely. Go search for tu...   Jul 29 2009, 11:34 PM
5stardesigns   I've been loooking for insparation. Fine. I gu...   Jul 29 2009, 11:37 PM
technicolour   That is really the best idea for you. I'm sorr...   Jul 29 2009, 11:39 PM
5stardesigns   QUOTEThat is really the best idea for you. I'm...   Jul 29 2009, 11:41 PM
emberfly   QUOTE(5stardesigns @ Jul 29 2009, 11:41 P...   Jul 30 2009, 12:01 AM
technicolour   No no, i'm not comparing any two people. What ...   Jul 29 2009, 11:43 PM
manny-the-dino   QUOTE(technicolour @ Jul 29 2009, 09:43 P...   Jul 29 2009, 11:47 PM
jcp   QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Jul 29 2009,...   Jul 29 2009, 11:51 PM
technicolour   QUOTE(jcp @ Jul 29 2009, 11:51 PM) Still ...   Jul 29 2009, 11:51 PM
5stardesigns   Yeah. Like my last two layouts that got accepted I...   Jul 29 2009, 11:46 PM
5stardesigns   QUOTEWell it can be. shifty.gif No but ...   Jul 29 2009, 11:49 PM
Franklyyn   this is one of the those designs that you probably...   Jul 30 2009, 01:48 PM


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