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Jul 29 2009, 10:56 PM
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I think this is way better then the past layouts I've posted about.
I did something different with the content area, text, border, coloring ect. Tell me what you think! And I think I should lower the scan lines? |
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Jul 29 2009, 11:04 PM
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Yeah, not so much. The banner is too small and the layout setup isn't very good. You should stay away from dotted/dashed borders and the background color doesn't match, at all. The text isn't much either. You have to make the banner more appealing and stand out from your layout since it's basically the main focus in the design. The black wasn't a good choice either and you should definitely try out some color palettes. I also think that instead of a color background, you should have some kind of texture or maybe even a pattern or something. The scan lines still aren't very attractive either. :\
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5stardesigns Huge Improvment Jul 29 2009, 10:56 PM
schizo To be completely honest, I think it's a little... Jul 29 2009, 11:04 PM
IWontRapeYou What program do you use again? Jul 29 2009, 11:04 PM
tcunningham QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Jul 30 2009, 12:04 A... Jul 29 2009, 11:06 PM
5stardesigns Gabbi:
I'm removing the scan lines and I... Jul 29 2009, 11:09 PM
emberfly QUOTE(5stardesigns @ Jul 29 2009, 10:56 P... Jul 29 2009, 11:11 PM
IWontRapeYou yesss. What photo shop do you have? Jul 29 2009, 11:11 PM
5stardesigns ^7.0 Jul 29 2009, 11:12 PM
IWontRapeYou QUOTE(5stardesigns @ Jul 29 2009, 11:12 P... Jul 29 2009, 11:18 PM
manny-the-dino Erm... sorry but you're going back, imo. You w... Jul 29 2009, 11:12 PM
emberfly I think you should stay away from scanlines altoge... Jul 29 2009, 11:13 PM
5stardesigns ^ I dont like those styles. Jul 29 2009, 11:20 PM
tcunningham QUOTE(5stardesigns @ Jul 30 2009, 12:20 A... Jul 29 2009, 11:20 PM
5stardesigns QUOTEAnd no one likes the style you design in. Got... Jul 29 2009, 11:22 PM
technicolour QUOTE(technicolour @ Jul 29 2009, 10:05 P... Jul 29 2009, 11:24 PM
5stardesigns ^Okay...
any ideas for the background? Jul 29 2009, 11:31 PM
technicolour No. Scratch this layout entirely. Go search for tu... Jul 29 2009, 11:34 PM
5stardesigns I've been loooking for insparation.
Fine. I gu... Jul 29 2009, 11:37 PM
technicolour That is really the best idea for you. I'm sorr... Jul 29 2009, 11:39 PM
5stardesigns QUOTEThat is really the best idea for you. I'm... Jul 29 2009, 11:41 PM
emberfly QUOTE(5stardesigns @ Jul 29 2009, 11:41 P... Jul 30 2009, 12:01 AM
technicolour No no, i'm not comparing any two people. What ... Jul 29 2009, 11:43 PM
manny-the-dino QUOTE(technicolour @ Jul 29 2009, 09:43 P... Jul 29 2009, 11:47 PM
jcp QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Jul 29 2009,... Jul 29 2009, 11:51 PM
technicolour QUOTE(jcp @ Jul 29 2009, 11:51 PM) Still ... Jul 29 2009, 11:51 PM
5stardesigns Yeah.
Like my last two layouts that got accepted I... Jul 29 2009, 11:46 PM
5stardesigns QUOTEWell it can be.
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No but ... Jul 29 2009, 11:49 PM
Franklyyn this is one of the those designs that you probably... Jul 30 2009, 01:48 PM![]() ![]() |