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Saraaaah
post Jul 29 2009, 04:36 PM
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So I was about to submit this, but I wanted some feedback on how i can improve on this or if this looks okay and what not.



Should I choose a different font, or do you guys think it looks okay?
 
 
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schizo
post Jul 29 2009, 10:45 PM
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The first version is way better. Sunbursts are so cliche, and the font looks even worse.

The first one is okay, but the background looks like it needs to be smoothed out, especially around the back of the heads. I think it would be nice if you added some color blotches of the green in her shirt as well.
 
emberfly
post Jul 29 2009, 10:59 PM
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QUOTE(schizo @ Jul 29 2009, 10:45 PM) *
The first version is way better. Sunbursts are so cliche, and the font looks even worse.


Yep....

andddddddddddddd! I think the text ruins it altogether....

I hate images that say random shit like "DREAM!" or "LIVE. LAUGH. LOVE.!"

especially "dream." that one is SOOOOOOO overused.
 

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