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Jul 29 2009, 04:36 PM
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![]() Sniff, sniff, hooray! ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 71 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 388,396 |
So I was about to submit this, but I wanted some feedback on how i can improve on this or if this looks okay and what not.
![]() Should I choose a different font, or do you guys think it looks okay? |
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Jul 29 2009, 10:06 PM
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
It has potential and I can grasp the concept of it, but it looks a bit too basic. It's like, take two images, cob them out, apply coloring, add a background texture with some brushes, and some random fonts. :\ The font, imo, should look a bit more idk "happy" to kind of give off the "smile" concept. Also, I think you should change the colors of the background and the brushes to something more brighter, like an orange-ish color. Otherwise, it's pretty good. edit: Ok, the sunburst thing is pretty cool but I still think you should have some more warmer colors in the background. The font looks pretty choppy too and it's also hard to read kind of. The images also look kind of over sharpened. :\ |
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krndreamangel graphic c&c Jul 29 2009, 04:36 PM
tcunningham Do something with the images, it looks like you ju... Jul 29 2009, 04:40 PM
krndreamangel ^ I actually did do some coloring on them.
The ori... Jul 29 2009, 04:45 PM
manny-the-dino Yeah maybe a bit more coloring would make this pop... Jul 29 2009, 09:28 PM
technicolour Font placement and it's just WAY too plain. It... Jul 29 2009, 09:42 PM
doughnut yes yes
you ruined it with the fonts.
dont like th... Jul 29 2009, 09:44 PM
krndreamangel Okay
so I changed the font and the placement of it... Jul 29 2009, 10:02 PM
krndreamangel yeah, I really don't like the font myself xP
a... Jul 29 2009, 10:13 PM
Mikeplyts Oh, you don't have to remove the entire textur... Jul 29 2009, 10:17 PM
schizo The first version is way better. Sunbursts are so ... Jul 29 2009, 10:45 PM
emberfly QUOTE(schizo @ Jul 29 2009, 10:45 PM) The... Jul 29 2009, 10:59 PM
krndreamangel Do you guys think I should just get rid of the tex... Jul 29 2009, 11:13 PM
emberfly well, I mean, once you put text on it, it's no... Jul 29 2009, 11:14 PM
krndreamangel yeah, I guess that's true.
I guess I'm don... Jul 29 2009, 11:18 PM![]() ![]() |