New Avril Layout!, Better? Options

[funride]

I've been making things a lot lately, but everyone hated the last Avril layout.
So I made two versions of the next one.
Take a look and tell me what you think.

'The Best Damn Thing'

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'Under My Skin'

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[AncientWhisper]

I agree with most of the ideas that was already suggested.

Try diversifying your designs. And by variety, we not only mean the banner. We also mean the whole layout of the---well--- layout. The alignment of the content (and modules if added) should vary between layouts. So far, your collection of designs includes almost all content and modules lying side-by-side.

Of course after adding in the content and codes, the layout will look less plain. Nevertheless, it would still be plain. There's a difference between being plain and simplistic. You can be simple with your layouts and make it look marvelous--- as long as they are consistently simple. The banner does not seem to belong to a simple layout with just a black background and a white content area. Don't be afraid to spend a lot of time on your designs to make every single detail in it fascinating. It'll pay off in the end. :]

While I can't say what's best for your layout (since everyone have different tastes), try making the background, alignment, and colors different. Try new combination and new techniques for every new layout you make. You never know what you'll learn by branching off. ;D

Most importantly, try to put effort into your layouts to the point where even you are deeply impressed--- layouts that you would irresistibly and definitely use.

For starters, the banner isn't too bad. I'd say you should enhance the background and lay off from using "templates" AKA same basic layout look and feel. Try making everything less squared. =]