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A little tweak?
synatribe
post Jul 22 2009, 02:14 PM
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Okay, so some people might remember my design of http://fashionlara.com . They recently asked me to go with a grayscale scheme after seeing my myspace profile, so I sort of tweaked it :] Tell me if you like it?

previous design http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?...mageID=14218941

this is the updated

http://fashionlara.com

took advice on background and the colors and some of the font

P.S Um, Im not sure if this should merge with my previous topic, but if it had to, then Im sorry in advance :]
 
 
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jiyong
post Jul 22 2009, 05:10 PM
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1. Definitely center the navigation links within their own boxes.
2. Also, the "Log in" link and the "(Empty)" text in the upper right corner nav are lower than the rest of the text on that line, making it look off.
3. Just a minor thing, the link on your navigation says "Misses" while the actual header for that page says "Missy". Might want to make that match.
4. The header text is a bit big and overpowers the logo too much, esp with the bright background. Maybe shrink the font a little bit?

Looks pretty good overall. I like the fonts you chose and the clean look you have. Keep it up (:
 

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