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 Jul 22 2009, 02:14 PM
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 AIDS at RAVES.  Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,386 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 598,878  |
Okay, so some people might remember my design of http://fashionlara.com . They recently asked me to go with a grayscale scheme after seeing my myspace profile, so I sort of tweaked it :] Tell me if you like it?
previous design http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?...mageID=14218941 this is the updated http://fashionlara.com took advice on background and the colors and some of the font P.S Um, Im not sure if this should merge with my previous topic, but if it had to, then Im sorry in advance :] |
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Jul 22 2009, 02:39 PM
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 I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
i think a lot of stuff feels off center or not level.
i think the name should be sitting down lower on this line.  also i think the whole navigation feels weird and not neat. for example about and functional have way more space on the left of the word than the right. all that stuff is off center. other words that are in boxes are off center. look at "solo mayoreo" it's almost touching that line on the right hand side of the box it's in. i think the font in all those boxes needs to come down a little so it's not so smashed in looking. |
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synatribe A little tweak? Jul 22 2009, 02:14 PM
Mikeplyts Yeah, I agree with JC. Also, I don't really li... Jul 22 2009, 02:44 PM tcunningham Everything JC pointed out.
As well as what Mike ... Jul 22 2009, 02:55 PM manny-the-dino It looks a lot better. I know the clients asked to... Jul 22 2009, 04:55 PM elletricity 1. Definitely center the navigation links within t... Jul 22 2009, 05:10 PM
splendid looks so good to me! bravo! Jul 22 2009, 10:57 PM |
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