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[artisticmelodies]

here's some new stuff i made...plez give me some c&c..(sorry if the colors are to bright..the computer i'm using makes everything look dark)

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i know this ones kinda weird looking but its just a rough beginning of something i'm trying to make with pictures i take..

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Reason for edit: Please thumb large images. Thanks :) -Nat

[emberfly]

1) Too bright for me.
2) I like this one a lot. It kind of bugs me, though, when I see brushes covering up people. I think it would look better if you erased the brushes that are on top of those people.
3) I think you should clean it up a ton. There are countless spots where the color is going outside the lines. The word doesn't exactly match the picture o.O
4) I think it would look a zillion times better if you increased the people's opacities to like 80% or something. Right now the headshots on top of them are very distracting, imo. It may even look better without them (?) It would be plain, but I think it would be better than what it is now.
5)I love the colors in both pictures. The contrast of colors is really pretty. I think you should use a different font, though, because you had to use a black line just to get it to fit :/ I don't like the black line. I think the border shouldn't be so thick.
6) The picture is very out of focus and bad quality, which isn't your fault, but it will be bad quality regardless of what you do to it >.<