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Mikeplyts
post Jun 19 2009, 03:50 AM
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It's not really much but I started to design another layout using that little use little words to make a big word effect thing. tongue.gif There's just a little problem. I don't know what to add, that is, if I should add anything at all. Help?



Also, some C&C wouldn't hurt. Thanks. _smile.gif
 
 
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manny-the-dino
post Jun 22 2009, 06:34 PM
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QUOTE(livwho @ Jun 19 2009, 03:07 PM) *
The curvy line down the middle is fluid and smooth but the text is blocky. It doesn't flow well together. I think you should stick with smooth lines rather than a textured text. I don't know if that makes sense. thumbsup.gif

Totally agree. The bulkiness and softness contradict each other. And the texture looks cool and all but I don't think it fits with what you're going for. I think you should add more to the right or something. Like more swirls. shrug.gif
 

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