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 Jun 16 2009, 03:40 PM
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I'm Luke  Group: Member Posts: 96 Joined: Mar 2009 Member No: 718,950  |
Ok, well first off, I took this photo, and I tried to make it look professional and stuff. I think the full size looks a whole lot better than the thumb, but I feel it's not really finished, so I'm looking for some critique and ideas. I think it turned out pretty good, but it just seems to be needing something, not sure if it's text or whatever. Thanks in advance- luke
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Jun 16 2009, 04:23 PM
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Well I see how, if this is your first edit it may be a big deal, but i mean there arent that many changes so not so much to critique. Looks, like you may have adjusted the curves, contrast, brightness, it looks like you bumped up the brightness to high, got rid of zits and what not... there wasnt much to work with in the first place, so sure it's better. it looks like the background is just like 3 different colors which is weird. I would find a texture on deviant art and make it your background. I mean, this must have taken, what...10 minutes? So usually there isnt much to critique on quick jobs like this. But I mean, compared to the b4 it is better so good job.
O and you took the color out of your eyes, so try putting it back! Select your eyes, feather it, then go to color balance and put it where you want. |
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Datrooper Me :) Jun 16 2009, 03:40 PM
IWontRapeYou You should post a before pic so we know what you a... Jun 16 2009, 03:56 PM Datrooper Ok, one sec Jun 16 2009, 04:04 PM shakeene hm, try this tut on it.
http://www.createblog.com/... Jun 16 2009, 04:15 PM Datrooper Thanks, i was trying to figure out why the color w... Jun 16 2009, 04:24 PM
jcp QUOTE(Datrooper @ Jun 16 2009, 04:24 PM) ... Jun 17 2009, 05:25 AM xzkdxrawrx I kinda prefer the before picture. If you just smo... Jun 17 2009, 05:02 AM Beenly Well, the after picture would have looked good if ... Jun 19 2009, 05:09 PM manny-the-dino It would have helped if you rotated the original b... Jun 22 2009, 07:04 PM Mikeplyts QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Jun 22 2009,... Jun 23 2009, 04:14 AM Datrooper Ok guys, sorry bout the rotation, i rotated it now... Jun 23 2009, 07:35 AM manny-the-dino The graininess looks a bit better. And you eyes lo... Jun 23 2009, 07:46 PM xzkdxrawrx Lower the opacity of the layer with the eyes on it... Jun 24 2009, 07:51 AM Datrooper Ok, how's this:
click to enlarge Jun 24 2009, 07:58 AM Mikeplyts better. ^_^ Jun 24 2009, 01:52 PM xzkdxrawrx Better but lower it a bit more :]
It still looks l... Jun 25 2009, 08:37 AM Datrooper And what bout now?
click to enlarge Jun 25 2009, 02:00 PM jcp Ya, when I do eyes, I do it as intense as possible... Jun 25 2009, 02:10 PM Datrooper Ok, so can someone help me find a good texture and... Jun 25 2009, 07:21 PM emberfly click to enlarge
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click to enlarge Jun 25 2009, 07:53 PM Datrooper ^^ i'm confused at what you did? Jun 25 2009, 07:55 PM emberfly eye+chin Jun 25 2009, 08:03 PM Mikeplyts QUOTE(emberfly @ Jun 25 2009, 09:03 PM) e... Jun 26 2009, 01:43 AM emberfly QUOTE(Mikeplyts @ Jun 26 2009, 01:43 AM) ... Jun 26 2009, 02:27 AM Datrooper Haha thanks, the tab was pretty funny, i like what... Jun 26 2009, 01:01 PM |
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