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theerinkal
post May 31 2009, 05:10 PM
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I'm unsure of what to do with the headers to my updated Scenic layout.

I already submitted this but it got rejected & now I'm working on it and I'm seeing what I can do to the layout to make it look better.

The "reviewer" of this layout said that I needed to give image credit & work on the headers. I have image credit but I don't know what I should do with the layouts. I don't understand how the person thought they needed some work.

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EDIT:: I've updated the layout & Screenshot.
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digitalfragrance
post May 31 2009, 06:03 PM
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As long as it takes only 5-10 minutes to do any of your designs you are not going to improve. You are not paying attention to detail, if that is the case.

Regarding your post, the colors in the content area are all over the place! The blues don't match the blues of the image, the black comes out of nowhere, and it looks like you didn't design a thing. All it looks like is an image that you found online, and the slapped on content and navigation.

Sure, that's is harsh, but I find it frustrating that I've spent some good time reviewing your work, only to find out that you spend 10 minutes creating some of it. It feels like a gigantic waste of my time. Also, you haven't regarding anyone's tips about taking a break, the rule of thirds, or Fibonacci's spiral. You really need to sit down and spend about 5-6 hours on your next design.
 

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theerinkal   Unsure...   May 31 2009, 05:10 PM
brooklyneast05   i dislike that the photo has a white border and th...   May 31 2009, 05:19 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ May 31 2009, 05:19...   May 31 2009, 05:27 PM
brooklyneast05   QUOTE(theerinkal @ May 31 2009, 05:27 PM)...   May 31 2009, 05:29 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ May 31 2009, 05:29...   May 31 2009, 05:31 PM
IWontRapeYou   There's no black anywhere in the image so it s...   May 31 2009, 05:58 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ May 31 2009, 05:58 P...   May 31 2009, 05:59 PM
digitalfragrance   As long as it takes only 5-10 minutes to do any of...   May 31 2009, 06:03 PM
IWontRapeYou   I think it looks better, I would also suggest not ...   May 31 2009, 06:04 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ May 31 2009, 06:04 P...   May 31 2009, 06:06 PM
brooklyneast05   for real, that's like 3 of us now who have sai...   May 31 2009, 06:05 PM
karmakiller   I pretty much agree with other people have said. Y...   May 31 2009, 07:27 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(karmakiller @ May 31 2009, 07:27 PM...   May 31 2009, 08:05 PM
karmakiller   QUOTE(theerinkal @ May 31 2009, 08:05 PM)...   Jun 1 2009, 12:01 AM
theerinkal   QUOTE(karmakiller @ Jun 1 2009, 12:01 AM)...   Jun 1 2009, 12:08 AM
rickysaurus   How about you take out all those blue bars in the ...   May 31 2009, 08:06 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(rickysaurus @ May 31 2009, 08:06 PM...   May 31 2009, 08:13 PM
manny-the-dino   Change the font you used for "scenic" fo...   May 31 2009, 10:04 PM
jcp   Of course white looks worse. Just that choice of b...   May 31 2009, 10:12 PM
Mikeplyts   I agree with Nat. Try using a white to blue gradie...   May 31 2009, 10:18 PM
emberfly   QUOTE(theerinkal @ May 31 2009, 05:10 PM)...   May 31 2009, 10:52 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ May 31 2009,...   May 31 2009, 11:24 PM
digitalfragrance   QUOTE(theerinkal @ Jun 1 2009, 12:24 AM) ...   May 31 2009, 11:36 PM
jcp   QUOTE(theerinkal @ May 31 2009, 11:24 PM)...   Jun 1 2009, 06:06 AM
xzkdxrawrx   QUOTENot if the layouts I make quick are REALLY go...   Jun 1 2009, 04:17 AM
theerinkal   QUOTE(xzkdxrawrx @ Jun 1 2009, 04:17 AM) ...   Jun 1 2009, 12:50 PM
digitalfragrance   QUOTE(theerinkal @ Jun 1 2009, 01:50 PM) ...   Jun 1 2009, 01:50 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(digitalfragrance @ Jun 1 2009, 01:5...   Jun 1 2009, 03:58 PM
Mikeplyts   The update looks pretty good setup wise, but the g...   Jun 1 2009, 04:21 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(Mikeplyts @ Jun 1 2009, 04:21 PM) T...   Jun 1 2009, 04:28 PM
IWontRapeYou   You should make the content area below the image t...   Jun 1 2009, 05:23 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Jun 1 2009, 05:23 PM...   Jun 1 2009, 05:27 PM
Markster   I think you should get rid of that gradient altoge...   Jun 1 2009, 05:34 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(Markster @ Jun 1 2009, 05:34 PM) I ...   Jun 1 2009, 05:36 PM
manny-the-dino   QUOTE(theerinkal @ May 31 2009, 10:08 PM)...   Jun 1 2009, 06:13 PM
brooklyneast05   @theerinkal do you think it's a layout you...   Jun 1 2009, 06:15 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Jun 1 2009, ...   Jun 1 2009, 06:31 PM
IWontRapeYou   Try and make layouts that are up to your own stand...   Jun 1 2009, 09:03 PM
brooklyneast05   QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Jun 1 2009, 06:15 ...   Jun 1 2009, 09:04 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Jun 1 2009, 09:03 PM...   Jun 1 2009, 09:37 PM
digitalfragrance   I think we should let her fiddle with the layout h...   Jun 2 2009, 12:26 PM
Mikeplyts   QUOTE(digitalfragrance @ Jun 2 2009, 01:2...   Jun 2 2009, 07:31 PM


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