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[theerinkal]

I'm unsure of what to do with the headers to my updated Scenic layout.

I already submitted this but it got rejected & now I'm working on it and I'm seeing what I can do to the layout to make it look better.

The "reviewer" of this layout said that I needed to give image credit & work on the headers. I have image credit but I don't know what I should do with the layouts. I don't understand how the person thought they needed some work.

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EDIT:: I've updated the layout & Screenshot.
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This post has been edited by theerinkal: Jun 1 2009, 12:30 AM

[brooklyneast05]

I don't see how any of the advice that you guys/gals have said can be applied in this layout. Please explain.

how do you not see how everything i said can be applied to the layout? i'm straight up talking about this specific layout and specific problems in my post.

i dislike that the photo has a white border and the content area has a black border. i don't like the black anywhere though because there isn't any black in the picture/background and it's just making stuff look heavy. you could have just as easily used a grey from the background. it looks like separate pieces, maybe becuase there is really nothing tying the background and content area/picture together. also all the blue bars/text, those colors should be pulled from the picture in my opinion. that bright neonish blue doesn't look good to me, it looks out of place because it's not even the same hue/shade/whatever as the blues in the picture.
not saying that if you did that you'd get accepted because it's still not much. a lot of details make it look sloppy though.