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theerinkal
post May 31 2009, 05:10 PM
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I'm unsure of what to do with the headers to my updated Scenic layout.

I already submitted this but it got rejected & now I'm working on it and I'm seeing what I can do to the layout to make it look better.

The "reviewer" of this layout said that I needed to give image credit & work on the headers. I have image credit but I don't know what I should do with the layouts. I don't understand how the person thought they needed some work.

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EDIT:: I've updated the layout & Screenshot.
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post May 31 2009, 05:13 PM
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If I was going through the queue, I would have rejected that layout, too. It looks like you just through a navigation on the image and put a content area next to it. It's nothing impressive. You should really work on your graphics more. I really haven't seen any improvement from last time when everyone said to take a break and try new things. It looks like you're doing the same stuff again. And most layouts get rejected for victorian-looking backgrounds and that looks like a victorian background to me. I really don't see how the background is supposed to fit in with the masthead to be honest.
 
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post May 31 2009, 05:20 PM
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QUOTE(A1Bassline @ May 31 2009, 05:13 PM) *
If I was going through the queue, I would have rejected that layout, too. It looks like you just through a navigation on the image and put a content area next to it. It's nothing impressive. You should really work on your graphics more. I really haven't seen any improvement from last time when everyone said to take a break and try new things. It looks like you're doing the same stuff again. And most layouts get rejected for victorian-looking backgrounds and that looks like a victorian background to me. I really don't see how the background is supposed to fit in with the masthead to be honest.


I just chose a background that was black but had some kinda design on it. I'm using my other layout as a template for this layout. I didn't want there to be much change so that I could have 2 of the same style layouts.

You're right, I didn't put much work into this layout. It only took me 10 minutes to make because I'm using a "template". The only way I, personally, can improve is by posting stuff on here and getting criticisim and comments. That is the way I improve on anything I do, from school to sports, I have to have criticisim and comments to improve; it's just the way I am.
 
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post May 31 2009, 05:22 PM
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QUOTE(theerinkal @ May 31 2009, 05:20 PM) *
You're right, I didn't put much work into this layout. It only took me 10 minutes to make because I'm using a "template". The only way I, personally, can improve is by posting stuff on here and getting criticisim and comments. That is the way I improve on anything I do, from school to sports, I have to have criticisim and comments to improve; it's just the way I am.



like everyone has said...this is what's wrong with your stuff, and it shows by how little attention to detail there is.
 

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theerinkal   Unsure...   May 31 2009, 05:10 PM
brooklyneast05   i dislike that the photo has a white border and th...   May 31 2009, 05:19 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ May 31 2009, 05:19...   May 31 2009, 05:27 PM
brooklyneast05   QUOTE(theerinkal @ May 31 2009, 05:27 PM)...   May 31 2009, 05:29 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ May 31 2009, 05:29...   May 31 2009, 05:31 PM
IWontRapeYou   There's no black anywhere in the image so it s...   May 31 2009, 05:58 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ May 31 2009, 05:58 P...   May 31 2009, 05:59 PM
digitalfragrance   As long as it takes only 5-10 minutes to do any of...   May 31 2009, 06:03 PM
IWontRapeYou   I think it looks better, I would also suggest not ...   May 31 2009, 06:04 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ May 31 2009, 06:04 P...   May 31 2009, 06:06 PM
brooklyneast05   for real, that's like 3 of us now who have sai...   May 31 2009, 06:05 PM
karmakiller   I pretty much agree with other people have said. Y...   May 31 2009, 07:27 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(karmakiller @ May 31 2009, 07:27 PM...   May 31 2009, 08:05 PM
karmakiller   QUOTE(theerinkal @ May 31 2009, 08:05 PM)...   Jun 1 2009, 12:01 AM
theerinkal   QUOTE(karmakiller @ Jun 1 2009, 12:01 AM)...   Jun 1 2009, 12:08 AM
rickysaurus   How about you take out all those blue bars in the ...   May 31 2009, 08:06 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(rickysaurus @ May 31 2009, 08:06 PM...   May 31 2009, 08:13 PM
manny-the-dino   Change the font you used for "scenic" fo...   May 31 2009, 10:04 PM
jcp   Of course white looks worse. Just that choice of b...   May 31 2009, 10:12 PM
Mikeplyts   I agree with Nat. Try using a white to blue gradie...   May 31 2009, 10:18 PM
emberfly   QUOTE(theerinkal @ May 31 2009, 05:10 PM)...   May 31 2009, 10:52 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ May 31 2009,...   May 31 2009, 11:24 PM
digitalfragrance   QUOTE(theerinkal @ Jun 1 2009, 12:24 AM) ...   May 31 2009, 11:36 PM
jcp   QUOTE(theerinkal @ May 31 2009, 11:24 PM)...   Jun 1 2009, 06:06 AM
xzkdxrawrx   QUOTENot if the layouts I make quick are REALLY go...   Jun 1 2009, 04:17 AM
theerinkal   QUOTE(xzkdxrawrx @ Jun 1 2009, 04:17 AM) ...   Jun 1 2009, 12:50 PM
digitalfragrance   QUOTE(theerinkal @ Jun 1 2009, 01:50 PM) ...   Jun 1 2009, 01:50 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(digitalfragrance @ Jun 1 2009, 01:5...   Jun 1 2009, 03:58 PM
Mikeplyts   The update looks pretty good setup wise, but the g...   Jun 1 2009, 04:21 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(Mikeplyts @ Jun 1 2009, 04:21 PM) T...   Jun 1 2009, 04:28 PM
IWontRapeYou   You should make the content area below the image t...   Jun 1 2009, 05:23 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Jun 1 2009, 05:23 PM...   Jun 1 2009, 05:27 PM
Markster   I think you should get rid of that gradient altoge...   Jun 1 2009, 05:34 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(Markster @ Jun 1 2009, 05:34 PM) I ...   Jun 1 2009, 05:36 PM
manny-the-dino   QUOTE(theerinkal @ May 31 2009, 10:08 PM)...   Jun 1 2009, 06:13 PM
brooklyneast05   @theerinkal do you think it's a layout you...   Jun 1 2009, 06:15 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Jun 1 2009, ...   Jun 1 2009, 06:31 PM
IWontRapeYou   Try and make layouts that are up to your own stand...   Jun 1 2009, 09:03 PM
brooklyneast05   QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Jun 1 2009, 06:15 ...   Jun 1 2009, 09:04 PM
theerinkal   QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Jun 1 2009, 09:03 PM...   Jun 1 2009, 09:37 PM
digitalfragrance   I think we should let her fiddle with the layout h...   Jun 2 2009, 12:26 PM
Mikeplyts   QUOTE(digitalfragrance @ Jun 2 2009, 01:2...   Jun 2 2009, 07:31 PM


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