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 May 4 2009, 11:59 PM
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I made another vector and this one took about three hours.
I think it turned out great.  More info on the DA page. How can I improve? |
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May 5 2009, 09:22 PM
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What an improvement, Joseph!
Just a few notes. The skin should have more of an alabaster undertone rather than a flat pink/tan. Most Caucasian's are olive toned or yellow/pink. Since she's a torch, I'd go with the latter. Also, the shadows on her legs are jaggedy like Mike pointed out. You should use your shapes rather than whatever you used (brush?) to make them smooth and even like the rest of your image. :) |
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jcp Classic Vector May 4 2009, 11:59 PM
manny-the-dino Wow this is really good. I wish I could make it bi... May 5 2009, 12:26 AM
jcp QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ May 5 2009, ... May 5 2009, 12:28 AM manny-the-dino Yeah like her face looks darker than her legs. May 5 2009, 12:30 AM jcp O my?! I could have sworn I used the same colo... May 5 2009, 01:12 AM manny-the-dino Yeah try making it lighter and show us. May 5 2009, 03:58 PM schizo It's pretty good. I agree with Nat about the s... May 5 2009, 04:18 PM Mikeplyts QUOTE(schizo @ May 5 2009, 05:18 PM) It... May 5 2009, 04:21 PM jcp QUOTE(schizo @ May 5 2009, 04:18 PM) It... May 5 2009, 04:23 PM manny-the-dino QUOTE(jcp @ May 5 2009, 02:23 PM) And how... May 5 2009, 04:30 PM IWontRapeYou It's ok. The skin color is really off though. ... May 5 2009, 04:20 PM schizo I'm not referring to how it's saved. If yo... May 5 2009, 04:35 PM jcp Ok so right now I need to make the shadows, shapes... May 5 2009, 09:30 PM |
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