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 May 2 2009, 09:31 AM
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Well i kinda in the middle of my first human vector and i just wanted to showcase it and get some advice and criticism.
I honestly don't like it. I just need more practice. What am i lacking? and i noticed a few mistakes. but ill just bypass those, cause ill fix them later. Also I think i may be using a bad method. well here it is.  
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May 3 2009, 02:35 AM
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QUOTE(doughnut @ May 2 2009, 07:49 AM)  well um. i dont know. that looks like a 15 minutes base draft or something. you could add more details, try to smoothen the edges and add shading too. you should check out some vectoring tutorials to help you out. I pretty much agree. Your edges are really choppy and square like. Make the shapes look natural. QUOTE(jcp @ May 2 2009, 09:34 PM) They look pretty good.  QUOTE(jcp @ May 3 2009, 12:03 AM) o and this is kinda a badly done unfinished project but... http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/6137/samson.png Honestly, this looks better than the one in your OP. |
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May 3 2009, 03:05 AM
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QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ May 3 2009, 02:35 AM) I pretty much agree. Your edges are really choppy and square like. Make the shapes look natural. They look pretty good. Honestly, this looks better than the one in your OP. do u think that unfinished one looks better then the sea side one? |
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jcp First human vector May 2 2009, 09:31 AM
Mikeplyts It looks alright for your first try. Maybe add mor... May 2 2009, 09:46 AM doughnut well um. i dont know. that looks like a 15 minutes... May 2 2009, 09:49 AM jcp Thats basically what it is but I don't know wh... May 2 2009, 10:06 AM
Datrooper QUOTE(jcp @ May 2 2009, 10:06 AM) Thats b... May 2 2009, 10:40 AM jcp QUOTE(Datrooper @ May 2 2009, 10:40 AM) I... May 2 2009, 10:50 AM Gigi Pick a better photo. It's impossible to do wel... May 2 2009, 02:49 PM schizo One of the biggest issues is that it doesn't l... May 2 2009, 02:59 PM jcp haha, well i started a totally new one with a diff... May 2 2009, 03:35 PM Beenly I think your first attempt looks okay, Joseph. A l... May 2 2009, 05:38 PM livwho It's alright. What I noticed first is her blan... May 2 2009, 09:41 PM jcp Ok I started a whole new vector project and finish... May 2 2009, 11:34 PM moirakas ^I like that. May 2 2009, 11:38 PM jcp QUOTE(moirakas @ May 2 2009, 11:38 PM) ^I... May 3 2009, 02:03 AM manny-the-dino QUOTE(jcp @ May 3 2009, 01:05 AM) do u th... May 3 2009, 05:34 PM Mikeplyts Ooo, the sea side ones are pretty good. Yeah, I ag... May 3 2009, 08:02 AM jcp Is the one of the guy still a little to choppy? I ... May 3 2009, 11:09 AM emberfly Usually people use vector programs for vectors. May 3 2009, 11:11 AM jcp QUOTE(emberfly @ May 3 2009, 11:11 AM) Us... May 3 2009, 11:18 AM Mikeplyts Oh, and, just something to throw out there, the gu... May 3 2009, 11:38 AM Mikeplyts Also, you can hardly see the dude's eyebrows. ... May 3 2009, 08:10 PM brooklyneast05 when you said the first human vector, i thought yo... May 4 2009, 12:31 AM livwho I like the seaside one. Pretty colors. May 4 2009, 09:01 PM |
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