Log In · Register

 

Resource Center Links

This Month's Contests | Hosts Looking for Hostees | Hostees looking for Hosts | BigBookofResources

Submission Guidelines

First human vector
Rating 2 V
Maccabee
post May 2 2009, 09:31 AM
Post #1


Senior Member
*******

Group: Official Designer
Posts: 5,880
Joined: Nov 2007
Member No: 593,382



Well i kinda in the middle of my first human vector and i just wanted to showcase it and get some advice and criticism.
I honestly don't like it. I just need more practice. What am i lacking? and i noticed a few mistakes. but ill just bypass those, cause ill fix them later.
Also I think i may be using a bad method. well here it is.



 
 
Start new topic
Replies
Mikeplyts
post May 2 2009, 09:46 AM
Post #2


Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots.
*******

Group: Official Designer
Posts: 6,371
Joined: Aug 2008
Member No: 676,291



It looks alright for your first try. Maybe add more details to the hair and make the lips smoother. Also, the hair near the left side of the neck is "blocky". You should make it look more natural. I think you should also add a few shadows on the nose area and add the line near the nostril like in the original picture. Otherwise, good job. thumbsup.gif
 

Posts in this topic
jcp   First human vector   May 2 2009, 09:31 AM
Mikeplyts   It looks alright for your first try. Maybe add mor...   May 2 2009, 09:46 AM
doughnut   well um. i dont know. that looks like a 15 minutes...   May 2 2009, 09:49 AM
jcp   Thats basically what it is but I don't know wh...   May 2 2009, 10:06 AM
Datrooper   QUOTE(jcp @ May 2 2009, 10:06 AM) Thats b...   May 2 2009, 10:40 AM
jcp   QUOTE(Datrooper @ May 2 2009, 10:40 AM) I...   May 2 2009, 10:50 AM
Gigi   Pick a better photo. It's impossible to do wel...   May 2 2009, 02:49 PM
schizo   One of the biggest issues is that it doesn't l...   May 2 2009, 02:59 PM
jcp   haha, well i started a totally new one with a diff...   May 2 2009, 03:35 PM
Beenly   I think your first attempt looks okay, Joseph. A l...   May 2 2009, 05:38 PM
livwho   It's alright. What I noticed first is her blan...   May 2 2009, 09:41 PM
jcp   Ok I started a whole new vector project and finish...   May 2 2009, 11:34 PM
moirakas   ^I like that.   May 2 2009, 11:38 PM
jcp   QUOTE(moirakas @ May 2 2009, 11:38 PM) ^I...   May 3 2009, 02:03 AM
manny-the-dino   QUOTE(doughnut @ May 2 2009, 07:49 AM) we...   May 3 2009, 02:35 AM
jcp   QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ May 3 2009, ...   May 3 2009, 03:05 AM
manny-the-dino   QUOTE(jcp @ May 3 2009, 01:05 AM) do u th...   May 3 2009, 05:34 PM
Mikeplyts   Ooo, the sea side ones are pretty good. Yeah, I ag...   May 3 2009, 08:02 AM
jcp   Is the one of the guy still a little to choppy? I ...   May 3 2009, 11:09 AM
emberfly   Usually people use vector programs for vectors.   May 3 2009, 11:11 AM
jcp   QUOTE(emberfly @ May 3 2009, 11:11 AM) Us...   May 3 2009, 11:18 AM
Mikeplyts   Oh, and, just something to throw out there, the gu...   May 3 2009, 11:38 AM
Mikeplyts   Also, you can hardly see the dude's eyebrows. ...   May 3 2009, 08:10 PM
brooklyneast05   when you said the first human vector, i thought yo...   May 4 2009, 12:31 AM
livwho   I like the seaside one. Pretty colors.   May 4 2009, 09:01 PM


Reply to this topicStart new topic
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: