masquerade, by xpaper_heartsx |
 Jun 29 2004, 01:49 AM
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.masquerade.
we're so guilty, even Shakespeare won't save us. every frantic kiss and desperate fumble for sanity is just a cover up; honey we both know that this dark bedroom is simply an excuse for the inevitable. seven am and the tv's still on; we've used up the whole night and i'll be d(tos)ed if i'm gonna let you wake up holding me. well the fall from your window is awfully tempting, and even your pretty eyes can't keep me here, lovely. what a saccharine suicide; i'll make it quick. |
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Jun 29 2004, 02:43 PM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
aaw wow. i like it
especially the last 6 lines. very every time i die-ish |
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xpaper_heartsx masquerade Jun 29 2004, 01:49 AM
xpaper_heartsx thanks...it's not one of my best... but thanks... Jun 29 2004, 05:33 PM angel-roh ooo nice poem! keep up the good work...but it... Jul 7 2004, 02:29 AM kyuubi319 i love your poem, its really really good, keep up ... Jul 9 2004, 09:53 AM islandkiss nice poem. Jul 9 2004, 12:02 PM
aZn_hApPy05 geez that is such a good poem... i like it a lot Jul 9 2004, 08:35 PM |
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