Just like you., I wrote this in like 4 minutes,Tell me what you think |
Just like you., I wrote this in like 4 minutes,Tell me what you think |
Apr 19 2009, 09:33 PM
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done. thanks.
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Apr 20 2009, 12:03 PM
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Good poetry shows -- it doesn't tell. Good poetry emphasizes imagery and the careful crafting of language to invoke a feeling or mood.
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Resurrection Just like you. Apr 19 2009, 09:33 PM
paozuu i'm confused... some lines have good rhyming y... Apr 20 2009, 12:22 AM![]() ![]() |