Just like you., I wrote this in like 4 minutes,Tell me what you think |
 Apr 19 2009, 09:33 PM
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Newbie  Group: Member Posts: 2 Joined: Dec 2008 Member No: 703,365  |
done. thanks.
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Apr 20 2009, 12:22 AM
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rawr? Group: Official Member Posts: 2,705 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 285,858 |
i'm confused... some lines have good rhyming yet, it's repetitive.
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Resurrection Just like you. Apr 19 2009, 09:33 PM
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