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post Mar 8 2009, 04:53 PM
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I finished the design aspects of this site, but now I just need to fill in the pages
:] tell me what you think,

p.s: I had a real hard time with this one

http://fashionlara.com
 
 
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post Mar 9 2009, 05:13 PM
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You've definitely improved from when you first started coming here. hatsoff.gif

However, I still don't like the logo. The translucent label on the images between the blue image and the yellow, there is a height difference. One is bigger than the other (the yellow one is wider). They should both be the same size if they're positioned in the same place. It made my eyes jump when I watched it a few times.

On the about page - You have a very light blue text, or that's just what it looks like when against the bright green background. I think it could be better if you made it a more complimentary color to the bright green. On the same page the store hours and location is in regular black text. It should match that of the about text.

On the contact page - one link to the "view map" is the ugly blue color, and then you have a link "F.A.Q's" that's grey, and barely legible. Another note about the "black" text, if you don't bold it, it should be spaced out more, so it's easier to read, or a larger point size.
 
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post Mar 11 2009, 12:01 AM
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QUOTE(divergent @ Mar 9 2009, 05:13 PM) *
You've definitely improved from when you first started coming here. hatsoff.gif

However, I still don't like the logo. The translucent label on the images between the blue image and the yellow, there is a height difference. One is bigger than the other (the yellow one is wider). They should both be the same size if they're positioned in the same place. It made my eyes jump when I watched it a few times.

On the about page - You have a very light blue text, or that's just what it looks like when against the bright green background. I think it could be better if you made it a more complimentary color to the bright green. On the same page the store hours and location is in regular black text. It should match that of the about text.

On the contact page - one link to the "view map" is the ugly blue color, and then you have a link "F.A.Q's" that's grey, and barely legible. Another note about the "black" text, if you don't bold it, it should be spaced out more, so it's easier to read, or a larger point size.


it's white text against the green background, I cant seem to find a legible hex code for that background, and I really cannot do anything about the logo :]
 

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