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The Seamstress
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post Mar 3 2009, 11:53 PM
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I like how the eyes look. There all bugged out. At first I made her into an alien, but it didn't turn out too hot. I just started this today, so I was just wondering how I am doing so far. I messed up big time on the corset tie thing I tried to do, but my hands have been really shaky lately.

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Slight Changes. No eyebrows, tried to make the string realer.
 
 
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Nadiyya
post Mar 5 2009, 03:28 AM
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Stunning.
This is so much better than the other one you recently posted. I absolutely love the craquelure skin and black hole eyes. Very impassioned, almost eternal.

Only a few things I'd change. First, her right eye is a little lighter than her left. Darken both to nearly black, almost vampiric or cadaverous (just be careful to not darken the strands of hair over her right eye). Also, there's a small spot just under the right side of her bottom lip--it's different than the rest of her skin, so it looks like that one piece was kinda peeled off. Finally, I'm not so sure about the stitching. It seems a little haphazard.

Overall though, I love it. Just a suggestion, too: have you tried without the eyebrows? I'm curious how that might look.
 

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