Clients Flyer [FEEDBACK PLEAES], A Flyer im making for a client Rating Options

[deteam]

Let me get some feedback on this . . . any comments about 2 much text, i cant do nothing about that cause he kept insisting i use all the information . . .

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Heres the updated version with the album covers moved and the top text in columns, now give me ideas about how to put the rest of the text [aka the download links] on there . .


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Second Edit:

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Final Version for Client:

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Final Version2 for Client:

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[manny-the-dino]

I didn't read the previous posts so sorry if this isn't such a constructive post.

I think you progressed with your edits. They got better. I think the ones that look the best are versions 3 & 4. But I think it'd look better if the bottom box was centered. I think the main reason you didn't center it was because of the paint brush, right? Honestly, I think the paint brush is annoying here; it's hard to work around. If you can, I would take it out. Or lower the opacity on it or mess with the settings or something. But it's nice :)

[deteam]

I didn't read the previous posts so sorry if this isn't such a constructive post.

I think you progressed with your edits. They got better. I think the ones that look the best are versions 3 & 4. But I think it'd look better if the bottom box was centered. I think the main reason you didn't center it was because of the paint brush, right? Honestly, I think the paint brush is annoying here; it's hard to work around. If you can, I would take it out. Or lower the opacity on it or mess with the settings or something. But it's nice :)

thanks but ya your right about the paint brush but unfortunately it was put on the same layer as the green border i made . . hence if i turn it off it woudl turn off everything lol . . . . bad job on my part but my client loved the final version and thats all tha really matters i guess . . . thanks alot to all the people here though for the feedback . . . really appreciate it . . .helped me alot



and yess he chose Version 2 with the drop shadows . .

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