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Clients Flyer [FEEDBACK PLEAES], A Flyer im making for a client
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deteam
post Mar 2 2009, 11:16 AM
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Let me get some feedback on this . . . any comments about 2 much text, i cant do nothing about that cause he kept insisting i use all the information . . .


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Heres the updated version with the album covers moved and the top text in columns, now give me ideas about how to put the rest of the text [aka the download links] on there . .


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post Mar 3 2009, 07:55 PM
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You might have to keep the text the size it is. Just play around with the leading and kerning and see if you can fit everything in that way.
 

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deteam   Clients Flyer [FEEDBACK PLEAES]   Mar 2 2009, 11:16 AM
IWontRapeYou   Instead of having the text run straight across try...   Mar 2 2009, 12:34 PM
Mikeplyts   QUOTEInstead of having the text run straight acros...   Mar 2 2009, 01:51 PM
LaRachel   The text at the top, where the links are, is drivi...   Mar 2 2009, 02:12 PM
Nadiyya   Besides the top text (columns! =p), the free m...   Mar 2 2009, 04:01 PM
deteam   some one show me an example of this column shyt lo...   Mar 2 2009, 07:31 PM
jcp   I think you should move the bottom stuff up higher...   Mar 2 2009, 07:41 PM
1angel3   I agree, you should make the text in two columns a...   Mar 2 2009, 07:43 PM
deteam   ok i did the ringtone text into two columns and re...   Mar 3 2009, 09:07 AM
1angel3   QUOTE(deteam @ Mar 3 2009, 07:07 AM) ok i...   Mar 3 2009, 10:40 AM
deteam   QUOTE(1angel3 @ Mar 3 2009, 10:40 AM) I t...   Mar 3 2009, 11:57 AM
deteam   updated it !!!! Stay Up -1- Subli...   Mar 3 2009, 12:03 PM
1angel3   That looks better. Try the transparent box, so you...   Mar 3 2009, 12:43 PM
deteam   QUOTE(1angel3 @ Mar 3 2009, 12:43 PM) Tha...   Mar 3 2009, 07:21 PM
1angel3   You might have to keep the text the size it is. Ju...   Mar 3 2009, 07:55 PM
deteam   QUOTE(1angel3 @ Mar 3 2009, 07:55 PM) You...   Mar 3 2009, 08:29 PM
1angel3   I like it a lot now. The only thing about it I wou...   Mar 3 2009, 09:05 PM
deteam   thanx alot i posted up the final version . . .thnx...   Mar 3 2009, 11:07 PM
manny-the-dino   I didn't read the previous posts so sorry if t...   Mar 4 2009, 12:12 AM
deteam   QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Mar 4 2009, ...   Mar 4 2009, 12:35 AM
1angel3   QUOTE(deteam @ Mar 3 2009, 09:07 PM) than...   Mar 4 2009, 08:01 PM
9001   I don't like the way the barbed wire repeats. ...   Mar 4 2009, 08:22 PM
deteam   QUOTE(9001 @ Mar 4 2009, 08:22 PM) I don...   Mar 7 2009, 02:32 AM


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