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Mar 2 2009, 11:16 AM
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Let me get some feedback on this . . . any comments about 2 much text, i cant do nothing about that cause he kept insisting i use all the information . . .
-------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Edit: Heres the updated version with the album covers moved and the top text in columns, now give me ideas about how to put the rest of the text [aka the download links] on there . . -------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Second Edit: -------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Final Version for Client: -------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Final Version2 for Client: Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Mar 3 2009, 07:55 PM
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![]() Naomi loves you. Y'all may call me NaNa ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,925 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 427,774 |
You might have to keep the text the size it is. Just play around with the leading and kerning and see if you can fit everything in that way.
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deteam Clients Flyer [FEEDBACK PLEAES] Mar 2 2009, 11:16 AM
IWontRapeYou Instead of having the text run straight across try... Mar 2 2009, 12:34 PM
Mikeplyts QUOTEInstead of having the text run straight acros... Mar 2 2009, 01:51 PM
LaRachel The text at the top, where the links are, is drivi... Mar 2 2009, 02:12 PM
Nadiyya Besides the top text (columns! =p), the free m... Mar 2 2009, 04:01 PM
deteam some one show me an example of this column shyt lo... Mar 2 2009, 07:31 PM
jcp I think you should move the bottom stuff up higher... Mar 2 2009, 07:41 PM
1angel3 I agree, you should make the text in two columns a... Mar 2 2009, 07:43 PM
deteam ok i did the ringtone text into two columns and re... Mar 3 2009, 09:07 AM
1angel3 QUOTE(deteam @ Mar 3 2009, 07:07 AM) ok i... Mar 3 2009, 10:40 AM
deteam QUOTE(1angel3 @ Mar 3 2009, 10:40 AM) I t... Mar 3 2009, 11:57 AM
deteam updated it !!!!
Stay Up
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Subli... Mar 3 2009, 12:03 PM
1angel3 That looks better. Try the transparent box, so you... Mar 3 2009, 12:43 PM
deteam QUOTE(1angel3 @ Mar 3 2009, 12:43 PM) Tha... Mar 3 2009, 07:21 PM
deteam QUOTE(1angel3 @ Mar 3 2009, 07:55 PM) You... Mar 3 2009, 08:29 PM
1angel3 I like it a lot now. The only thing about it I wou... Mar 3 2009, 09:05 PM
deteam thanx alot i posted up the final version . . .thnx... Mar 3 2009, 11:07 PM
manny-the-dino I didn't read the previous posts so sorry if t... Mar 4 2009, 12:12 AM
deteam QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Mar 4 2009, ... Mar 4 2009, 12:35 AM
1angel3 QUOTE(deteam @ Mar 3 2009, 09:07 PM) than... Mar 4 2009, 08:01 PM
9001 I don't like the way the barbed wire repeats. ... Mar 4 2009, 08:22 PM
deteam QUOTE(9001 @ Mar 4 2009, 08:22 PM) I don... Mar 7 2009, 02:32 AM![]() ![]() |