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 Mar 2 2009, 11:16 AM
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Let me get some feedback on this . . . any comments about 2 much text, i cant do nothing about that cause he kept insisting i use all the information . . .
-------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Edit: Heres the updated version with the album covers moved and the top text in columns, now give me ideas about how to put the rest of the text [aka the download links] on there . . -------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Second Edit: -------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Final Version for Client: -------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Final Version2 for Client: Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Mar 2 2009, 04:01 PM
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Besides the top text (columns! =p), the free mixtapes area bugs me. Are those links going to be image mapped? If not, no one can download them because the URLs are cut off. Also, I think you should experiment with different fonts and weights in that area.
Finale, Jay Red, Dead Sound Entertainment, and Stereo Star - these should all be the same font and font weight. The album titles (Beginning of the End Vol 1, etc.) - these should be a different font / font weight than the artists, possible have a bit of text-indent. The URLs for downloading - they should be the lightest font weight, because you want people going there to download, not reading it. People will remember an artist's name or the album name before they will a download link. |
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deteam Clients Flyer [FEEDBACK PLEAES] Mar 2 2009, 11:16 AM
IWontRapeYou Instead of having the text run straight across try... Mar 2 2009, 12:34 PM
Mikeplyts QUOTEInstead of having the text run straight acros... Mar 2 2009, 01:51 PM LaRachel The text at the top, where the links are, is drivi... Mar 2 2009, 02:12 PM deteam some one show me an example of this column shyt lo... Mar 2 2009, 07:31 PM jcp I think you should move the bottom stuff up higher... Mar 2 2009, 07:41 PM 1angel3 I agree, you should make the text in two columns a... Mar 2 2009, 07:43 PM deteam ok i did the ringtone text into two columns and re... Mar 3 2009, 09:07 AM 1angel3 QUOTE(deteam @ Mar 3 2009, 07:07 AM) ok i... Mar 3 2009, 10:40 AM deteam QUOTE(1angel3 @ Mar 3 2009, 10:40 AM) I t... Mar 3 2009, 11:57 AM deteam updated it !!!!
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Subli... Mar 3 2009, 12:03 PM 1angel3 That looks better. Try the transparent box, so you... Mar 3 2009, 12:43 PM deteam QUOTE(1angel3 @ Mar 3 2009, 12:43 PM) Tha... Mar 3 2009, 07:21 PM 1angel3 You might have to keep the text the size it is. Ju... Mar 3 2009, 07:55 PM deteam QUOTE(1angel3 @ Mar 3 2009, 07:55 PM) You... Mar 3 2009, 08:29 PM 1angel3 I like it a lot now. The only thing about it I wou... Mar 3 2009, 09:05 PM deteam thanx alot i posted up the final version . . .thnx... Mar 3 2009, 11:07 PM manny-the-dino I didn't read the previous posts so sorry if t... Mar 4 2009, 12:12 AM deteam QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Mar 4 2009, ... Mar 4 2009, 12:35 AM 1angel3 QUOTE(deteam @ Mar 3 2009, 09:07 PM) than... Mar 4 2009, 08:01 PM 9001 I don't like the way the barbed wire repeats. ... Mar 4 2009, 08:22 PM deteam QUOTE(9001 @ Mar 4 2009, 08:22 PM) I don... Mar 7 2009, 02:32 AM |
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