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moorepocket
post Feb 26 2009, 01:57 PM
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I made a new layout and add gossip girl icons.


http://fragmentx.livejournal.com/12464.html

http://fragmentx.livejournal.com

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post Feb 26 2009, 03:13 PM
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Okay, I see now, the layout is on his main page, I was just on one of the icon pages. Well about the icons they all look like screen caps to me, with the very minimum done, it looks bad, to me. Just cropping out a screen cap after sizing it down. It looks like you may have changed the overall tone of the pictures, but nothing else after that. So you mass produced is what it looks like, I've seen some of your icons before, I know that you can make really great ones, if you're putting effort towards it, these don't look like your best effort. As far as the layout, it's nice, but with the livejournal tables, it looks like its either misaligned, or cramped up. There's an ad behind the sidebar. Doesn't look good to me, I think if the ad is still going to be on the page, you should make the effort to incorporate it somehow with the layout, not try and hide it half way. The banner for the layout is okay. You used really good photos to make it, but like Mike said, it is over-textured.
 
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post Feb 26 2009, 04:32 PM
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QUOTE(divergent @ Feb 26 2009, 04:13 PM) *
Okay, I see now, the layout is on his main page, I was just on one of the icon pages. Well about the icons they all look like screen caps to me, with the very minimum done, it looks bad, to me. Just cropping out a screen cap after sizing it down. It looks like you may have changed the overall tone of the pictures, but nothing else after that. So you mass produced is what it looks like, I've seen some of your icons before, I know that you can make really great ones, if you're putting effort towards it, these don't look like your best effort. As far as the layout, it's nice, but with the livejournal tables, it looks like its either misaligned, or cramped up. There's an ad behind the sidebar. Doesn't look good to me, I think if the ad is still going to be on the page, you should make the effort to incorporate it somehow with the layout, not try and hide it half way. The banner for the layout is okay. You used really good photos to make it, but like Mike said, it is over-textured.


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