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Feb 23 2009, 12:22 PM
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Composition I'm playing with. The theme is Africa, and the effort to stop poverty by 2025. Any helpful feedback would be nice.
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Feb 23 2009, 11:35 PM
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I didn't really notice the way you cobbed everything but now that I look at them, horns look weird since they zig-zag. The group of kids up top are low in quality & hard to see. I agree with Mike on the white. And I think the orange brush at the bottom is a bit random. Like everyone else said, this isn't your best, tbh. But it's good either way. :)
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Feb 23 2009, 11:41 PM
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![]() talent on another level ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735 |
I didn't really notice the way you cobbed everything but now that I look at them, horns look weird since they zig-zag. The group of kids up top are low in quality & hard to see. I agree with Mike on the white. And I think the orange brush at the bottom is a bit random. Like everyone else said, this isn't your best, tbh. But it's good either way. :) thanks for the feedback. this is minimized version of the original so the kids look low quality and small. its till a wip, so these tips given so far are great. |
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bigtrey90 Africa 2025 (WIP) Feb 23 2009, 12:22 PM
GunsNRachel My only complaint is that it's a bit small. I... Feb 23 2009, 03:48 PM
9001 Cool design, but the cutouts are shitty. Feb 23 2009, 03:49 PM
bigtrey90 QUOTE(9001 @ Feb 23 2009, 04:49 PM) Cool ... Feb 23 2009, 05:47 PM
GunsNRachel QUOTE(bigtrey90 @ Feb 23 2009, 05:47 PM) ... Feb 24 2009, 05:35 AM
ForgiveTheSinner I like it, I like all of your works actually. But ... Feb 23 2009, 06:02 PM
bigtrey90 QUOTE(ForgiveTheSinner @ Feb 23 2009, 07... Feb 23 2009, 07:58 PM
IWontRapeYou I don't think the cougar looks to bad, the spr... Feb 23 2009, 08:02 PM
bigtrey90 QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Feb 23 2009, 09:02 P... Feb 23 2009, 09:04 PM
Markster I agree; I love that lion being the focus of the p... Feb 23 2009, 09:17 PM
bigtrey90 QUOTE(Markster @ Feb 23 2009, 10:17 PM) I... Feb 23 2009, 10:47 PM
ArjunaCapulong admittedly this isn't the best I've seen f... Feb 23 2009, 09:32 PM
schizo It's not my favorite thing of yours that I... Feb 23 2009, 10:25 PM
BandidaFamosa I really like it.
I also like the Orange BG. Even ... Feb 24 2009, 02:22 PM
bigtrey90 QUOTE(BandidaFamosa @ Feb 24 2009, 03:22 ... Feb 24 2009, 03:14 PM
elletricity i'd cut out the images a little more cleanly, ... Feb 26 2009, 10:10 PM
Mikeplyts I think this looks really good but again, not your... Feb 27 2009, 10:33 PM
LaRachel I really love that shade of orange. I think all th... Feb 28 2009, 08:26 PM
bigtrey90 thanks for all the feedback Mar 1 2009, 09:02 AM![]() ![]() |