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 Feb 23 2009, 07:01 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots.  Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291  |
I recently made a graphic and figured I'd get some c&c on it. I think the only thing I don't like about it is the text.
 Anyways, tell me what you think. UPDATE:  UPDATE #2:  UPDATE #3:  UPDATE #4:  |
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Feb 23 2009, 08:46 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
Noootttt bad!
The font still seems a little out of place though. Under the middle line that goes like O-----o, delete the little cubes under neath and space your font out under there. Adjust the kerning to make large spaces between each character and then I'd think it'd look awesome. |
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Feb 23 2009, 08:55 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
QUOTE(technicolour @ Feb 23 2009, 09:46 PM)  Noootttt bad! The font still seems a little out of place though. Under the middle line that goes like O-----o, delete the little cubes under neath and space your font out under there. Adjust the kerning to make large spaces between each character and then I'd think it'd look awesome. Thanks.  I'm currently working on it. :)
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Mikeplyts Analysis Feb 23 2009, 07:01 PM
technicolour Dude, that's 9000 brushes too many. Feb 23 2009, 07:06 PM schizo Yeah, I was going to say it reminds me of the prev... Feb 23 2009, 07:09 PM superstitious I like the techie thing you're trying to do, y... Feb 23 2009, 07:53 PM Mikeplyts Ok, I updated. I tried to not use to many brushes.... Feb 23 2009, 07:58 PM 9001 I like it, but I'm not feeling the font. The ... Feb 23 2009, 08:01 PM
Mikeplyts QUOTE(9001 @ Feb 23 2009, 09:01 PM) I lik... Feb 23 2009, 08:11 PM superstitious Second update is much better. :) Feb 23 2009, 08:15 PM Mikeplyts QUOTE(superstitious @ Feb 23 2009, 09:15 ... Feb 23 2009, 08:17 PM IWontRapeYou Nice updates. I am not going to lie the first was ... Feb 23 2009, 08:24 PM Mikeplyts ^haha, thanks. Feb 23 2009, 08:40 PM Mikeplyts Total double post. :P
Anyways, I tried to do what... Feb 23 2009, 08:59 PM IWontRapeYou looks better to me. Maybe move the words left a li... Feb 23 2009, 09:02 PM Mikeplyts QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Feb 23 2009, 10:02 P... Feb 23 2009, 09:07 PM Markster Update #3 does look more pleasing to the eye than ... Feb 23 2009, 09:07 PM Mikeplyts Ok, I moved the text a little to the left.
In res... Feb 23 2009, 09:14 PM schizo Woah, definate improvement. I still think it could... Feb 23 2009, 10:18 PM manny-the-dino QUOTE(schizo @ Feb 23 2009, 07:18 PM) Jus... Feb 23 2009, 10:57 PM Tomates if i were you i would possibly try adding a red or... Feb 23 2009, 10:19 PM technicolour Why is everyone going to the left?
I think if it ... Feb 23 2009, 11:10 PM jcp hmmm...It just looks like you found a million brus... Feb 23 2009, 11:12 PM salcha4u Wow, big improvement from your first one. Though, ... Feb 24 2009, 11:26 PM Mikeplyts Thanks for the feedback.
Well, the background i... Feb 25 2009, 10:00 PM deteam good stuff i like how it looks updated now . .
S... Feb 26 2009, 01:20 PM elletricity the last few definitely improved from the first on... Feb 26 2009, 10:14 PM |
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