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 Feb 23 2009, 07:01 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots.  Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291  |
I recently made a graphic and figured I'd get some c&c on it. I think the only thing I don't like about it is the text.
 Anyways, tell me what you think. UPDATE:  UPDATE #2:  UPDATE #3:  UPDATE #4:  |
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Feb 23 2009, 08:46 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
Noootttt bad!
The font still seems a little out of place though. Under the middle line that goes like O-----o, delete the little cubes under neath and space your font out under there. Adjust the kerning to make large spaces between each character and then I'd think it'd look awesome. |
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Mikeplyts Analysis Feb 23 2009, 07:01 PM
technicolour Dude, that's 9000 brushes too many. Feb 23 2009, 07:06 PM schizo Yeah, I was going to say it reminds me of the prev... Feb 23 2009, 07:09 PM superstitious I like the techie thing you're trying to do, y... Feb 23 2009, 07:53 PM Mikeplyts Ok, I updated. I tried to not use to many brushes.... Feb 23 2009, 07:58 PM 9001 I like it, but I'm not feeling the font. The ... Feb 23 2009, 08:01 PM
Mikeplyts QUOTE(9001 @ Feb 23 2009, 09:01 PM) I lik... Feb 23 2009, 08:11 PM superstitious Second update is much better. :) Feb 23 2009, 08:15 PM Mikeplyts QUOTE(superstitious @ Feb 23 2009, 09:15 ... Feb 23 2009, 08:17 PM IWontRapeYou Nice updates. I am not going to lie the first was ... Feb 23 2009, 08:24 PM Mikeplyts ^haha, thanks. Feb 23 2009, 08:40 PM Mikeplyts QUOTE(technicolour @ Feb 23 2009, 09:46 P... Feb 23 2009, 08:55 PM Mikeplyts Total double post. :P
Anyways, I tried to do what... Feb 23 2009, 08:59 PM IWontRapeYou looks better to me. Maybe move the words left a li... Feb 23 2009, 09:02 PM Mikeplyts QUOTE(IWontRapeYou @ Feb 23 2009, 10:02 P... Feb 23 2009, 09:07 PM Markster Update #3 does look more pleasing to the eye than ... Feb 23 2009, 09:07 PM Mikeplyts Ok, I moved the text a little to the left.
In res... Feb 23 2009, 09:14 PM schizo Woah, definate improvement. I still think it could... Feb 23 2009, 10:18 PM manny-the-dino QUOTE(schizo @ Feb 23 2009, 07:18 PM) Jus... Feb 23 2009, 10:57 PM Tomates if i were you i would possibly try adding a red or... Feb 23 2009, 10:19 PM technicolour Why is everyone going to the left?
I think if it ... Feb 23 2009, 11:10 PM jcp hmmm...It just looks like you found a million brus... Feb 23 2009, 11:12 PM salcha4u Wow, big improvement from your first one. Though, ... Feb 24 2009, 11:26 PM Mikeplyts Thanks for the feedback.
Well, the background i... Feb 25 2009, 10:00 PM deteam good stuff i like how it looks updated now . .
S... Feb 26 2009, 01:20 PM elletricity the last few definitely improved from the first on... Feb 26 2009, 10:14 PM |
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