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KILL ME NOW!, im bored havent written in ages
dispn0ygonekrazy
post Feb 18 2009, 05:38 PM
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I hear your voice and the silent scream that echoes in my head
watching the painful memories that play while I sleep
why'd you leave? a question left without an answer to give
a scar that remains, no cure for as long as I live

I'm scared to sleep, scared to close my eyes
scared to death that I'll have to see you die
again and again the pain that never leaves my side
so no matter how hard I try, or the tears that I've cried

you'll haunt me wherever I go, when I'm asleep or awake
a nightmare thats living and walking for my life to take
I feel like I'm already dead, is this what happened to you?
a death so slow and agonizing, the experience you'll put me through

KILLL MEE NOWWWWWWWWW!!!
 
 
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emberfly
post Feb 18 2009, 08:55 PM
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kthxbai
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QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Feb 18 2009, 04:38 PM) *
a nightmare thats living and walking? for my life to take


Your poem was VERY good, but this line confused me. Incorrect word choice?
 

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