Midwinter Lovers, Poem Options

[CrotchetTheLeper]

I submitted this to the writer's block contest. I don't write much poetry, but I saw the contest and suddenly became inspired, haha.

Tell me what you think...



Midwinter Lovers

The boughs above have hands to hold
Our path is worn, our feet grow cold

We're synchronized, our steps, our hearts
Forever youthful neath the stars

A friend or foe, I cannot say
The moon is bright, the branches sway

Unearthly lights, a distant glow
Illuminating fallen snow

A racing mind, a frigid touch
Our bodies shake, consumed by lust

Hearing words, so long unspoken
Pious whispers, mouth unopened

The bridges burn, above, below
An ember world, turns neath the snow

My lips, they part, words will not come
We stop, we stare, the cold has won

[Maccabee]

I entered the writers block competition but i didnt even look at my poem twice.
I just type it and hit add.

I sit here typing, wasting my life,
When I should be up, and ready to play,
I've made a change to the family name
The people can say whatever they feel
if I get a chance to speak ill say it, like its been said
by the great,
the influential, and all who are dead
there wisdom reminds us of the things that have passed
the words that they spoke slipped away so fast
try and carry on the legend, if you can try
But soon you'll find out, that your living a lie
dont change your life to look like, all the others
just make yourself better, and more like eachother
grow, and laugh, and learn everyday
and soon enough you'll see, your heading the right way.

You have to read it like a poem though.