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 Nov 23 2008, 09:07 PM
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This semester, I had to do three projects for my IAT 102 Graphic Design class. I am in no way as talented or artsy as most of the members here, but I just want to get your opinion/suggestions/critique on them.
1. Redesign an existing magazine spread that contains both text and images. The text must have a ragged edge. (original spread) 2. Design a paper mock-up for a cylindrical container that will sit on a shelf in a store. (I don't know why it's showing up with the weird line around the tennis ball now...) 3. Using graphical style inspired by an art movement, design a 2'x3' Smart Poster advertisement containing RFID tags (cell phones can download information from them), for either an entertainment service or an eco-awareness service. Feedback and criticism is encouraged. My TA hardly gave any of us any feedback. She only told me 1) I got an A, but she really hated the quote around the heads, 2) I got an A/A- (she hasn't decide yet) and she liked how the silhouettes directed people's attention through the object(?), and 3) I got an A/A- and she just "really liked the poster". Great, thanks for the input. I want to know what you guys think... be brutal if you want. Just be honest. |
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Nov 24 2008, 10:39 PM
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Yeah I'm actually not a fan of sideways text either for the same reason. It is a pain to read, so I guess that should come into consideration when doing a magazine layout.
I don't think the text on the path looks unprofessional, I just haven't really seen it done before in a magazine like that. Rarely done =/= unprofessional. w/e overall your first one looks really good. |
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Dec 11 2008, 02:13 PM
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QUOTE(Gigi @ Nov 24 2008, 07:39 PM)  Yeah I'm actually not a fan of sideways text either for the same reason. It is a pain to read, so I guess that should come into consideration when doing a magazine layout. LOL I think I've experienced you attempting to read sideways :P Except for the second one..(I totally blame your partner haha) I love them :D haha Now I kinda understand the text on the path but It still looks awsome.. And I don't have a problem reading sideways LOL |
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Joannnnnne Graphic Design projects Nov 23 2008, 09:07 PM
JonHMChan I am absolutely in love with the first one. The se... Nov 23 2008, 09:12 PM Joannnnnne Okay, I just went out and printed Project 3... hol... Nov 24 2008, 01:48 PM YukkaPukka first one is amazing. the other ones are good too ... Nov 24 2008, 02:15 PM schizo Someone criticized the text around the heads in th... Nov 24 2008, 04:59 PM Gigi Your TA sounds like a stupid bitch. Anyonewho does... Nov 24 2008, 05:09 PM Drama I love the text in the first one too, I love every... Nov 24 2008, 06:09 PM Tomates The first one is awesome. I think that your page s... Nov 24 2008, 06:11 PM Mikeplyts I like the first one the most and the third one is... Nov 24 2008, 06:36 PM Joannnnnne Haha, thanks guys. My favourite one is the first t... Nov 24 2008, 09:22 PM ForgiveTheSinner I love all three, especially the last one. I think... Nov 24 2008, 09:32 PM
Joannnnnne Okay, I got an A/A- on Project 3. My partner and I... Nov 25 2008, 07:57 PM mystline For the first one, I also love the text around the... Nov 26 2008, 01:35 AM Joannnnnne Haha thank you so much for your thoughts! It... Nov 26 2008, 01:43 AM Markster Joanne. I like these a lot. I think they're al... Nov 26 2008, 01:58 AM stephinika Well done Joanne! I took this class and it suc... Nov 26 2008, 02:17 AM Joannnnnne Thanks Mark! Thanks Steph! My TA was Angel... Nov 26 2008, 02:22 AM stephinika LOL I know who that is...and yeah she's okay. ... Nov 26 2008, 02:38 AM 1angel3 I love the first one too. It looks better than the... Nov 26 2008, 06:53 PM vogueXdirge Tyra has something to say about these: Nov 27 2008, 01:52 AM angeconda 1. As I said in the draft and final feedback stage... Dec 10 2008, 03:49 PM Joannnnnne Wow... I'm kind of taken aback at the fact tha... Dec 10 2008, 06:14 PM
angeconda You're welcome. I probably should go back to g... Dec 12 2008, 05:42 PM |
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