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 Nov 23 2008, 09:07 PM
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This semester, I had to do three projects for my IAT 102 Graphic Design class. I am in no way as talented or artsy as most of the members here, but I just want to get your opinion/suggestions/critique on them.
1. Redesign an existing magazine spread that contains both text and images. The text must have a ragged edge. (original spread) 2. Design a paper mock-up for a cylindrical container that will sit on a shelf in a store. (I don't know why it's showing up with the weird line around the tennis ball now...) 3. Using graphical style inspired by an art movement, design a 2'x3' Smart Poster advertisement containing RFID tags (cell phones can download information from them), for either an entertainment service or an eco-awareness service. Feedback and criticism is encouraged. My TA hardly gave any of us any feedback. She only told me 1) I got an A, but she really hated the quote around the heads, 2) I got an A/A- (she hasn't decide yet) and she liked how the silhouettes directed people's attention through the object(?), and 3) I got an A/A- and she just "really liked the poster". Great, thanks for the input. I want to know what you guys think... be brutal if you want. Just be honest. |
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Nov 26 2008, 01:35 AM
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For the first one, I also love the text around the heads. Very eye-catching. I think it should be a little bigger, though.. considering it should be like, EYE-POPPING right? For me, it's just eye-popping. Haha. Yeah, I guses it is unprofessional though.. I mean I rarely see it, but I mean, it is something that catches your attention.
Anddd, for the pics of the models, I'm not really digging where it's placed, honestly. It feels like it's uneven and slapped on. I'm digging everything else though! For the 2nd one, I agree, very clean and simplistically nice. Of course, (and you probably notice this yourself), the ball can be cut out better. The third one, I don't really like the font used for DT Cuisine, actually. It seems like I'm going to a computer place, if anything, haha. |
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Joannnnnne Graphic Design projects Nov 23 2008, 09:07 PM
JonHMChan I am absolutely in love with the first one. The se... Nov 23 2008, 09:12 PM Joannnnnne Okay, I just went out and printed Project 3... hol... Nov 24 2008, 01:48 PM YukkaPukka first one is amazing. the other ones are good too ... Nov 24 2008, 02:15 PM schizo Someone criticized the text around the heads in th... Nov 24 2008, 04:59 PM Gigi Your TA sounds like a stupid bitch. Anyonewho does... Nov 24 2008, 05:09 PM Drama I love the text in the first one too, I love every... Nov 24 2008, 06:09 PM Tomates The first one is awesome. I think that your page s... Nov 24 2008, 06:11 PM Mikeplyts I like the first one the most and the third one is... Nov 24 2008, 06:36 PM Joannnnnne Haha, thanks guys. My favourite one is the first t... Nov 24 2008, 09:22 PM ForgiveTheSinner I love all three, especially the last one. I think... Nov 24 2008, 09:32 PM Gigi Yeah I'm actually not a fan of sideways text e... Nov 24 2008, 10:39 PM
chuiee13 QUOTE(Gigi @ Nov 24 2008, 07:39 PM) Yeah ... Dec 11 2008, 02:13 PM Joannnnnne Okay, I got an A/A- on Project 3. My partner and I... Nov 25 2008, 07:57 PM Joannnnnne Haha thank you so much for your thoughts! It... Nov 26 2008, 01:43 AM Markster Joanne. I like these a lot. I think they're al... Nov 26 2008, 01:58 AM stephinika Well done Joanne! I took this class and it suc... Nov 26 2008, 02:17 AM Joannnnnne Thanks Mark! Thanks Steph! My TA was Angel... Nov 26 2008, 02:22 AM stephinika LOL I know who that is...and yeah she's okay. ... Nov 26 2008, 02:38 AM 1angel3 I love the first one too. It looks better than the... Nov 26 2008, 06:53 PM vogueXdirge Tyra has something to say about these: Nov 27 2008, 01:52 AM angeconda 1. As I said in the draft and final feedback stage... Dec 10 2008, 03:49 PM Joannnnnne Wow... I'm kind of taken aback at the fact tha... Dec 10 2008, 06:14 PM angeconda You're welcome. I probably should go back to g... Dec 12 2008, 05:42 PM |
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