Graphic Design projects Options

[Joanne]

This semester, I had to do three projects for my IAT 102 Graphic Design class. I am in no way as talented or artsy as most of the members here, but I just want to get your opinion/suggestions/critique on them.

1. Redesign an existing magazine spread that contains both text and images. The text must have a ragged edge.

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(original spread)


2. Design a paper mock-up for a cylindrical container that will sit on a shelf in a store.

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(I don't know why it's showing up with the weird line around the tennis ball now...)


3. Using graphical style inspired by an art movement, design a 2'x3' Smart Poster advertisement containing RFID tags (cell phones can download information from them), for either an entertainment service or an eco-awareness service.

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Feedback and criticism is encouraged.
My TA hardly gave any of us any feedback. She only told me 1) I got an A, but she really hated the quote around the heads, 2) I got an A/A- (she hasn't decide yet) and she liked how the silhouettes directed people's attention through the object(?), and 3) I got an A/A- and she just "really liked the poster". Great, thanks for the input.

I want to know what you guys think... be brutal if you want. Just be honest.

[ForgiveTheSinner]

I love all three, especially the last one. I think the words around the heads look weird there but if it's removed it would look empty...so leaving it there is probably best.