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 Oct 28 2008, 01:20 PM
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 You can call me Jon  Group: Duplicate Posts: 878 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 9,806  |
Hey guys, I'm doing a site for a new philanthropic fashion firm, and I'd really appreciate some feedback from anyone. I value this community's opinions, so feel free to let me know about anything!
http://www.jonhmchan.com/feel/index2.swf |
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Oct 28 2008, 10:36 PM
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 torn Group: Official Designer Posts: 953 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,718 |
Simple, but very fitting. It takes about 30 seconds to load for me, and when the site first loads (the image and white bar thing), the music skips a little. On some of the backgrounds, "clothing with a conscience" is impossible to read, as well as your credit. Other than that, I really like it. I love all of your flash designs; they're always amazing. :]
Oh, and the text is a bit unclear/blurry sometimes. I think bolding it might work. |
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xXYouMeBedNowXx FEEL CLOTHING Oct 28 2008, 01:20 PM
Mikeplyts Uh... that link doesn't work for me. The page ... Oct 28 2008, 01:40 PM xXYouMeBedNowXx Try it now? It should work! Oct 28 2008, 01:53 PM manny-the-dino I like it. I love your flash designs. The only thi... Oct 28 2008, 01:56 PM Janette wow, I like it a lot. i agree with the font. it... Oct 28 2008, 04:17 PM schizo It's amazing. The photos look a little stretch... Oct 28 2008, 04:33 PM ArjunaCapulong I think this is one of your more practical designs... Oct 28 2008, 04:44 PM Markster I really like this. And omfg @ the music. D: Oct 28 2008, 05:17 PM Tomates I really like it. The flash is awesome, i love the... Oct 28 2008, 07:36 PM xXYouMeBedNowXx Thanks so far for everything everyone! Just a ... Oct 28 2008, 08:14 PM
manny-the-dino QUOTE(xXYouMeBedNowXx @ Oct 28 2008, 06:1... Oct 28 2008, 11:34 PM Blaqheartedstar like everyone said the text is hard to read. but e... Oct 29 2008, 12:56 AM xXYouMeBedNowXx Okay, I've tried fixing the quality of the tex... Oct 30 2008, 12:37 PM Blaqheartedstar Content section is a little better.
Is this what ... Oct 30 2008, 10:44 PM so0o_contagious i love it.
1. musics great.
2.font needs to be sm... Oct 31 2008, 02:54 AM YukkaPukka That's f**king amazing! Oct 31 2008, 12:03 PM |
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