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TocasMiracle
post Oct 13 2008, 04:20 AM
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Quick piece of work pretty bored.

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Ah it's f**ked now.
 
 
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markmejia
post Oct 13 2008, 11:56 AM
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I have to agree with everyone. It does look very incomplete, and the "TM" cut off along the bottom and right edges looks just really pointless. As well as the "Aaron" that seems to be under the greyish .. thing. Try not to go for simplicity too much, and create an actual focal point that everyone can see and find pleasing to the eye.
 

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