Vampire story, please help! or just read and reply! |
Vampire story, please help! or just read and reply! |
Aug 19 2008, 02:41 PM
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![]() i call it love<333 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 134 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 448,479 |
Okay I'm writing a vampire story and I've only come up with one lame title.
I'll Post up the first chapter. (i've written up to 8 chapters so far) Tell me what you think PLEASE! Should I change anything? What don't you like about it. And if you can even think of a title that is okay for me to use, please let me know! Thank you! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Aug 26 2008, 11:14 PM
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^ i didn't read it, because it hurt my eyes the way
you posted it . i love to read, so please repost it (in your cb blog or something) |
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CO0KiE Vampire story Aug 19 2008, 02:41 PM
----- Ok, so I didn't read all of it (it was giving ... Aug 26 2008, 11:12 PM
CO0KiE QUOTE(----- @ Aug 26... Sep 3 2008, 06:52 PM
CO0KiE oh okay thank you. Please read it and let me know ... Sep 3 2008, 06:50 PM![]() ![]() |