whats you think of my first div overlay? Options

[Lj-Phresh]

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fusea...28-f5464667c805

i couldn't upload the code and post it for others cuz the
staff said it was hard to see.....
well what you think?

[yellowxgirl]

This is a fantastic job for your FIRST overlay, I've seen people who have made a lot of overlays, and they look worse than this one, still. So kudos for that.

Criticism: Those colors together made my eyes cross. Maybe if you had replaced the orange with white (or the green with white) it would have been easier to read, less rape on the eyes.

The stripes on the words also made it extremely hard to read, if you had left the stripes OFF the words, it would have made it much better.


and I'm not sure if it was intentional or not, but the comments are completely visible on firefox. If it was intentional, then I suggest styling them up to look a bit prettier.

:3