Poems, Anyone? Options

[Foolish Heart]

Here's a poem for the guy that understands me, he's dying. I won't tell you any more private things about me. I write my poems based on my feelings, it's how I deal with my feelings. It's really hard for me to let him go.

Fading Away, by Foolish Heart [Me]

You walk in my life
Now your fading away
Heart beating so fast
Tears fill my eyes
Take my hand
Im here to help
I look at you
Blurred in confusion
Your fading away
Hold me tight
Heres my heart
Forever yours to keep
Dont forget
I'll follow you
I love you so
Just for you to know

[ichiban]

Here's a poem I wrote
I wrote it during C Period .. I got too bored in the class:

right now, my heart lays torn apart and bleeding
inside, im just crying & dying ..
and you know what? there's only one thing i'm needing
but guess what? i've given up trying
ive given up hope, and fer all i kno
youll nevr love me, to you itz jus a joke
a joke that wasn't funny the first time around
and now wen i cry, der is no sound
kuz i've cryed my heart out ..
and even tho yer makin me wanna jz die ..
ill still love you, no doubt

Little stupid poem, but anyways .... haha xP