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Melie
post Aug 10 2008, 06:06 PM
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post Aug 10 2008, 06:54 PM
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QUOTE(Melie @ Aug 10 2008, 07:06 PM) *
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It's not very good. I'll keep my comments constructive.

Color: I understand why you've made it red, but that doesn't exactly make it a good thing. It's a bit violent, you know? You need something to break up the monotony, or maybe a darker/paler red, something not as bright as what you have now.

Banner: Not a big fan of the clip art style graphics there. There're plenty of American flag photos on the internet, pick a better one than that. Same applies to the Olympic rings.

Font: Too bland, especially the grey text over the Olympic rings. One thing you should try to avoid, as a designer, is using Arial. It sucks. There are other sans serif fonts (Tahoma, Century Gothic, others for download on sites like dafont) that you can use in your images, just be a little creative. Speaking of font, you need to make the body font a little bigger, or change it to something else, cuz the Arial is not hitting it at all.
 

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