Deep Manipulation, . Options

[crazeegirl411]

Reference:
Forewords: below
Chapter One

I believe every single person in this world owns a mask. They own an emotional mask. They put it on their face any chance they want to lie to the world, or anything beyond their reach.

Some people never knew they had one. At least not until something drastic comes on that they need to fib. There also comes a part, a story behind how they first found a mask.

Mine was the utmost dreadful and surprising thing in the world.

Characters

Annie
Vicky
Kris
Ron

Introduction

Nobody has ever, ever noticed the spark of evil in me. Of course, I have known that everyone has somewhat of a selfish personality in them. But perhaps I never noticed that that evil living in my mind is more than just a spark.

Oh, nobody else noticed either.

They all thought I was just a plain girl, if not a very friendly and rapturous one. I wasn’t especially mentioned or recognized for anything along the lines of, “Annie is nice.”

I didn’t believe there was such thing as being nice just because you have especially given something you can either afford or not to one other person that you do not have to give to.

Though, I was nice enough.

Nice enough for the kind of life I have. Not especially great, not especially bad.

It’s always in the middle. I’m not the best, not the worst.

Most people are in the middle, and I’m also one of the many that never noticed it. I was contented enough with life.

Never teach me to have goals. Blame everything that happened on him. He gave me motivation, and not necessarily a good one.

I’m going to blame every last thing and person in this world before I admit what I have done, to be…

A word I cannot utter. Let’s just say it’s a repulsive medium-sized “w” word.

[crazeegirl411]

i can never write like that. good job sharie!

Heehee...thanks and since you're first ever to comment, I changed the name .

Wow. Beautiful!  Like what Kris said, wow. That's some awesome writing there. I wish I can write like you. 

Aw...but I already love your writing style! It's awesommeee..keep writing

da-damn sharie that was just spectacular. hMM...now i wanna be creative and write a story. only problem is im not good at it. haha.

jackie

You don't have to be good at it...just write, erm..what you feel

Hey that's pretty creative. Good points writen in there.

Thanks..I'm good at writing the introductions, but never..ever, the end and climax

Actually,

"When you want to fool the world, tell the truth."
--Bismarck

*ahem* That's when manipulation comes to the story.

wow.....really meaningful...damn i wish i could write like that!

Read more, write more, and you can also do it

u had a clear voice in your writing. beautiful.

AHA! My good trait is being able to express myself well. Thank you

make this into a screen plaY?

Huh? Oh..yes. If only someone famous would pay attention to my yucky writing

wow.. its so true.. that was the introduction right..? so theres more? 

Yep...there's more, so subscribe to this topic? and I'm writing chapter one, will be done soon.

Thanks everyone! One of the best feelings in the world is to receive comments and appreciation. Chapter One coming soon! Subscribe